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Standing On the Edge

As I stand on the edge Slowly looking down, I cannot help but wonder How far to the ground. Inside I am shaking I’m trying to act real brave. Should I close my eyes and just do it Or should I smile and wave. As I stop and look around me All my friends have gone, I’m the only one still hanging here, Time that I moved on. It’s just that I had such a good life, I loved it so much being here. I know that my life has expired But I hold every moment so dear. Finally I know I must do it So close my eyes and let go, I actually feel like I’m floating, Or flying really slow. Now as I land I’m astonished How soft the ground seems to be, And the pillowy pile where I landed, Are all the leaves that left before me. Brenda Meier-Hans 10. 12. 2013

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Date: 3/4/2015 8:18:00 AM
Standing on the Edge watching is a frighten thought, as we see all our friend and family start living our life. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/2/2015 3:32:00 PM
I like the twist in the final stanza - congrats on your win Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/2/2015 9:51:00 AM
Awesome poem, Brenda. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/1/2015 11:53:00 PM
Congrats on ur super win Brenda!
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Date: 3/1/2015 8:41:00 PM
Congrats Brenda...I often dream of falling..not sure what that means..I never land. Thoroughly enjoyed your poem and a big congrats. BG
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Date: 3/1/2015 7:53:00 PM
Brenda, CONGRATS on your win. ThanXs for supporting my contest ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 8/28/2014 2:28:00 PM
I like the poem Brenda, their's only one thing wrong with standing on the edge. Looking down, and wondering how easy it is to let go... Love your poem...Linda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 8/28/2014 5:53:00 PM
Thanks for reading it Linda. I'm happy you like it.
Date: 8/28/2014 2:14:00 PM
Brenda- awesome, beautiful write. Letting go is always so beautiful and this poem exemplifies it. the leaves ...just lovely. :-) Christine
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 8/28/2014 5:52:00 PM
Thanks Christine, usually when we fall it's not as bad as we anticipate.
Date: 8/28/2014 12:43:00 PM
Oh...this was such an intriguing write, Brenda. I was holding my breath till that last stanza! :) Thanks for sharing and welcome to PS. I appreciate your visits.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 8/28/2014 1:37:00 PM
Thank you Eileen. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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