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Within your protective shell wherein settled my fathers spell i am born in wonderment and grow in stages, an endowment Awed by my growth i kick and feel your pleasure so quick everything so new around, plea fine as long as you stand by me. Its a new world strange only mom with no change I struggle within to adapt and grow amazed and apt discover new things in the process doing great as time progress awed by the world i see happy as you stand by me Then i meet another as you as if a stage of life in queue she opens up a different world igniting passion that unfurled a sensual touch and i falls into an abyss, enthralls so like you yet different is she but i am complete as you stand by me You leave me for another world i wait in vain, curled what have i done for thee i try but cannot see then i feel your presence again unable to glimpse i am in pain you comfort me through zephyr by the sea and i feel better as you stand by me. © Nadiya (17 Jan '15) *Won Third place on 25 Jan 2015 in the contest 'Stand by me' by Kelly Deschler. *Won fourth place on 07 Feb 2015 in 'my last contest' by Kelly Deschler.

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Date: 2/16/2015 1:18:00 AM
WOW, Poesy, Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
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Date: 2/16/2015 2:26:00 AM
Thank you dear Linda
Date: 2/15/2015 10:17:00 PM
Poesy, CONGRATS on your awesome placement ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 2/15/2015 10:59:00 PM
Thank you very much dear friend
Date: 2/7/2015 2:54:00 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Nadiya :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/7/2015 9:27:00 PM
Thank yoj Jan... sweet of you..
Date: 2/7/2015 2:35:00 PM
A beautiful poem from my "Stand By Me" contest. It was nice to read it once again, Nadiya. Congrats on the win and thank you for participating!
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Date: 2/7/2015 9:26:00 PM
Thank you Kelly for the contest and for the win... be blessed.
Date: 2/3/2015 10:55:00 AM
Ok! I enjoyed the journey and would stand by you to earn much more! keep writing enjoyable pieces! Hi there!
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Date: 2/3/2015 11:25:00 AM
Thanks again...nads
Date: 2/1/2015 1:46:00 PM
NADIYA:) A lovely and beautiful win *Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:06:00 PM
Thank you dear... lov, nad!
Date: 1/28/2015 9:48:00 AM
Congratulations Nadiya!
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Date: 1/28/2015 12:11:00 PM
Thank you friend.. appreciate your visit...nad!
Date: 1/25/2015 2:31:00 AM
Nad, Congrats>rajat
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Date: 1/25/2015 6:12:00 AM
Thank you my friend
Date: 1/24/2015 9:06:00 PM
Very deep write, congrats on the win, Nadiya
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Date: 1/25/2015 6:12:00 AM
Thank you Dr. RAM.
Date: 1/24/2015 6:51:00 PM
A constant companion with a kindred spirit is a thing to treasure always... I am happy that you have found yours, Nadiya. Congrats on your win with this lovely poem!
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Date: 1/25/2015 6:11:00 AM
Thank you very much Kelly
Date: 1/24/2015 6:41:00 PM
Such a beautiful depth to this write Nadiya - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/25/2015 6:11:00 AM
Thank you Jan
Date: 1/24/2015 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Nadiya! Such beautiful thoughts about the wonderful bond with your mother who stands by you. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/25/2015 6:10:00 AM
Thank you Sandra...
Date: 1/17/2015 6:39:00 AM
Yes! I see it now... I was reading in a bit of a rush this morning, and read the other first.... This is so beautiful, Nadia.. Sure to be a winner in the contest!......... As for any correcting, I would probably ask help from you! Lol... I only started writing about a year ago, but there are lots of nice people here who are willing to help.... Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 1/17/2015 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Arlene...hugs... Nadiya

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