Stalker

=================== Peering at her as she sleeps, nearing tiers of the devout... Smearing pleas on the glass as he peeps, impotent, from the grass. He's about to unfold the silk memoir he keeps, and lovingly smooth it out. ===================

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Laura Leiser

Date: 7/30/2015 2:49:00 PM

Gives me goosebumps! You wrote this so well, Lycia! Congrats on your win!

Lycia Harding
Date: 8/1/2015 1:45:00 AM

Thank you, Laura. Yeah, this guy is creep-a-licious! heh heh. xoxo

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/30/2015 5:05:00 AM

I see you've used this here and yes, the meter and rhyme he asked for is indeed present. HI Lycia, congratulations on your fine win! hugs!

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/30/2015 6:11:00 AM

Yay - I ROCK! Heh heh. Hi Kimmie, thank you for noticing my perfect adherence to structure. xoxoxo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/30/2015 1:24:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning work Lycia! Amazing!

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/30/2015 4:15:00 AM

Thank you, my Dear! xoxo

Lee Carter

Date: 7/29/2015 2:22:00 PM

Love your stalker congrats on your win! ~lee

Lycia Harding
Date: 7/29/2015 2:58:00 PM

Thank you, Lee! xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2015 8:43:00 PM

OH my, this can be metaphorical (or not) I quite like it!

Lycia Harding
Date: 6/26/2015 12:47:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea. I wanted to illicit a real "creepy peeper" feeling (without getting too risque) so I made a few changes that I think speak to that vibe a little better. Tell me if you agree...

Abed Anthony

Date: 6/24/2015 9:51:00 PM

I am interested in the poetry work of yours, if you wont mind may we be friends concerning my talent and your creativity, Best regards Says, ABED

Lycia Harding
Date: 6/24/2015 10:17:00 PM

Of course we can, Abed!. I will add you to my Favorites...

Constance La France

Date: 6/24/2015 9:03:00 PM

Lycia, best of luck in the contest with this interesting write

Lycia Harding
Date: 6/24/2015 10:16:00 PM

Thank you, BW!