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Stagnant

Blue above and Blue below, Clumps of clouds, Falling slow. Airplanes surge but do not move. The elephant passes in the room. I try to sleep, to turn away, Turning pages yet the story stays Stagnant. I look everywhere except at you. I see nothing, except for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/19/2016 12:30:00 PM
Zin Lim,, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:39:00 AM
Hi Zin, Way to go! I love your writing style. The thoughts expressed bring out the emotions very well - stagnation is not a prided quality yet at times it comes in quantity. Well penned.
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:03:00 AM
- A lovely poem. - Have a great new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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