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Staff of Life

How strange life is. It circles round, stands end on end Distorts the view, then plays the music back again I remember how he would tiptoe in, from a warm and downy bed He would wink at me, and beckon me, while the moon and stars peeked in By kitchen light, we would eat a bite..., a “midnight snack”, he said He would lift me up, and from the counter top, I'd watch him tear the bread The staff of life, a simple thing, these two small bowls of wheat My Dad and I, the broken bread, with milk on top, or cream instead A bit of sugar or honey dripped, to make it slightly sweet Such a little thing, so comforting, and it helped us both to sleep…. *** While… in my care, his final years…especially at the end He was fading then, no appetite, few foods that he might try Soft bread I’d make, with milk poured in, …….and we would talk of then And through the night the hours stretched, until the morning light I’d sit upon his bed and talk, and help him spoon a bite to eat The things in life turn inside out, somehow come back again
_________________________ For the Contest sponsored by Regina Riddle "Intimate Relationship"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/3/2014 11:39:00 AM
Hi there Carrie , excellent write luv, congratulations xx
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Date: 9/3/2014 8:31:00 AM
Lovely write recollecting the old memories, Carrie. congrats
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Date: 9/3/2014 6:30:00 AM
Dear Carrie, What a tender tribute to your father's love and companionship. You must miss him as much as I miss my dad. God bless you for being there as his health failed and for trying to resurrect the good times. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/3/2014 12:56:00 AM
bittersweet images of everlasting love and care.. so compelling, hands down, carrie... rounds of applause to you!
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Date: 9/3/2014 12:39:00 AM
I LOVE this. It's a wonderful poem. A treasure. Thank you for entering in my contest and congratulations. With love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 6/6/2012 9:09:00 PM
This was the kind of treat my stepdad and his sons loved eating. I never got the appeal of it but of course it had to do, for you, with being with your dad at night and comforted. A lovely poem, CArrie.
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Date: 6/6/2012 7:27:00 PM
CARRIE, Congratulations with your wonderful win, In SARA KENDRICK'S "PLEASANT CHILDHOOD MEMORY" contest. take care;-) ~ Always PD
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Date: 6/6/2012 5:30:00 AM
These are such lovely memories Carrie. They are all we have left in the end. Congratulations on your win in this contest! :)
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Date: 6/6/2012 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sara's "A Pleasant Childhood Memory" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/6/2012 2:07:00 AM
Carrie congrats on your win...David
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Date: 6/5/2012 5:55:00 PM
Carrie, I really enjoyed this one..I felt the emotion in it...Thanks for participating in my contest..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2011 12:09:00 PM
That was lovely
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Date: 8/22/2011 11:12:00 PM
This poem shows your greatness as a poet Carrie.Amazing poetry from you.Best wishes.
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Date: 8/22/2011 9:42:00 PM
Lovely touching write, reminds me of how the end was for me dad....good luck on contest lovely Lady Carrie....with love....old Jack
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