Stable And Last

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Earth is a planet Earth is stable Stable for eons Stable swirling mass Mass of gases Mass of gold Gold lands in rivers Gold slips through hands Hands develop character Hands reach out in love Love grows Love holds Holds hands Holds hearts Hearts melt Hearts never part Part ways Part stays Stays in spirit Stays in mind Mind can't forget Mind holds on On goes love On goes life Life continues somewhere Life intertwines Intertwines with others Intertwines in emotions Emotions in soul Emotions never leave earth Earth awaits return Earth is groaning Groaning for release Groaning for Christ Christ's return to repair Christ's coming renews Renews like spring Renews like Eden Eden perfect garden Eden perfect life Life on earth Life for eons Eons go on Eons last Last forever Last into infinity Infinity is forever Forever Infinity

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Bill Baker

Date: 2/3/2024 10:06:00 PM

Very creative and heartfelt poetry, Sara. The Blitz form of poetry allows the thoughts to connect in a unique way. Not everyone is able to write this way. I admire your sharing your thoughts and concerns through this form of poetry, my friend. A FAV for my list. We have hope in the Second Coming. Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/4/2024 3:28:00 AM

I am encouraged with your faving it also. Thank you, Bill. I had an uncle named Bill, but of course, long ago deceased. Sara K

Hiya Sharma

Date: 2/3/2024 7:38:00 PM

Oh my, what a beautiful blitz this is, dear Sara! You've truly excelled in creating a wonderful flow while choosing impeccable words that create an impact on the reader's heart.. Those lines about the Earth are so deep! "Hearts melt Hearts never part Part ways Part stays Stays in spirit Stays in mind" What a heart-touching part.. I really loved reading this.. Sending you many best wishes and light always :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/4/2024 3:27:00 AM

Thank you, Hiya. I like the smiley face. Thanks for the best wishes. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/3/2024 4:41:00 PM

brilliantly done, Sara K! I think the 'Blitz' form is becoming your forte. I agree with what Daniel said...your poem captures the essence of Earth's eternal stability and the intricate interplay of life, love, and spirituality.Am faving...maybe it'll be selected as POTD...Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/4/2024 3:26:00 AM

Why, thank you, Sara B. I am honored that you would fav it. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 2/3/2024 11:41:00 AM

Wow this is stunning really. The shape flow and depth of your words truly is just soul hitting! Brilliant blitz. Youve really mastered the art of weaving blitz. I loved so many lines in this. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2024 12:36:00 PM

Thank you, IE. I appreciate the visit. I need God's Light always. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/3/2024 10:27:00 AM

Dearest Sara, Wow, your poem beautifully captures the Blitz style essence of Earth's eternal stability and the intricate interplay of life, love, and spirituality. The repetition and progression of themes reflect the cyclical nature of existence and the enduring bond between humanity and the planet. Your poetic prowess evoke a profound sense of connection and hope for renewal. It is so reflective and thought-provoking piece that I read it twice. - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/3/2024 12:35:00 PM

Why, thank you, Daniel. Just putting down what pops into your head in Blitz sort of way is not easy and it necessarily doesn't say what you would like for it to say. I appreciate the visit. Sara K