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St Malo

a tall blonde, white plaited with salt all elbows and knees,a new menhir on a guilded stage of tidewash and wind,crouched under a sky of ovens and red brick, serious and wide-eyed before a sandring that loses its smile as the sun drowns; the sea turns to black.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/14/2014 12:55:00 AM
your poems will get more traffic on this site if you post one a day instead of 10. You may get 100 reads in a day instead of a handful. Good luck, this is a great site for poets of all skill levels.
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Leslie Philibert
Date: 11/18/2014 10:04:00 AM
a good point, but I don`t worry too much about how many reads I get, I just want to work on my poetry, best wishes..

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