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Squealing Brakes

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Squealing Brakes

Silent empty train,
Lush warm body presses mine
Slow down or derail

Eyelashes flutter
Blue eyes flash intense passion
Too late now, no brakes


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  1. Date: 4/20/2010 9:12:00 AM
    I love these two haikus.. It creates a lot of imagination..of intimacy indeed..beautiful..Charma

  1. Date: 4/15/2010 1:27:00 AM
    This is so powerful, Christi! You create an incredible image with many interpretations. I love it. Excellent job. Ruben.