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I saw red reflecting off winter snows as I stared out the window on tip-toes. And I’m quite sure that I saw Rudolph's nose but it could have been a plane, I suppose. I couldn't see his sleigh in the shadows and yet, I was hoping that Santa shows. But then I heard bells jiggling, and I froze, I'm spying on Santa; what if he knows? I flew across the room, in my bedclothes, and closing my eyes, I pretend to doze. What happened next I can’t rightly disclose, let's just say spying's best left to the pros. (Monorhyme) 12/23/2020 Christmas Rhyme only 8 - 12 lines - Premium Prize Poetry Contest Enter Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Date: 12/27/2020 11:39:00 AM
what a super monorhyme Emile, many congrats on your win and I'm sending seasons greetings to you and your loved ones:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/30/2020 6:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan, and have a Happy New Year my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/27/2020 6:34:00 AM
Emile what a wonderful mono rhyme! congrats on your win!!
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Date: 12/27/2020 6:49:00 AM
Thanks Krish, I appreciate your comments, Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/27/2020 4:52:00 AM
Emile, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny Christmas poem!
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Date: 12/27/2020 6:49:00 AM
Thanks Tania, I appreciate your comments, Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/23/2020 3:51:00 PM
This is wonderful. I love it M E R R Y Christmas, dear friend. God bless you
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/24/2020 6:31:00 AM
Thanks Regina, I appreciate your comments, Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.

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