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Springtime In the Countryside

Cold howling winds have finally died And a spring sun’s decided to abide There’s no sweeter place than countryside What a wonderful time to send the kids outside Reclaiming a chunk of ‘me’ time I decide To tackle that novel and sit by the fireside Hang stress out like an old faded apron to hide It’s the perfect moment to feel thoroughly satisfied Plenty of time later to be busy and preoccupied Children intoxicated with spring are wide-eyed Exude joy and freedom in their stride Silly with excitement, wild and cock-eyed Running free up and down the hillside I see no reason for chide As I watch them eagle-eyed Smiling with so much love and pride Thinking of days gone by as a guide When I'll call them back inside The kids will be exhausted, bonafide With rosy cheeks into bed they’ll glide Won’t take long choosing a side For tonight’s treasured stories at bedside AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on March 10, 2018 for contest SPRING FLING ZING KING (OR QUEEN) sponsored by MICHAEL VASEK - HONORABLE MENTION

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Date: 6/25/2018 8:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Love the imagery. Well done.
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Date: 6/24/2018 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your very well deserved win , Line !!! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 6/24/2018 9:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated.
Date: 6/24/2018 3:04:00 PM
I really really like how you did your entry for this contest. Congrats on being part of the winners' list, Line.
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Date: 6/24/2018 4:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea. It was fun.
Date: 3/11/2018 8:36:00 AM
What a delightful monorhyme Line about the kids under mum's proud watchful eye. All the best in the contest...Maria
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Date: 3/11/2018 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maria. Very appreciated.
Date: 3/11/2018 6:19:00 AM
Love the imagery and joyous feelings it stirs to initiate...finding me time in between mom time can sometimes be hard...what better way to kick off spring with the kiddos...truly lovely write, Line :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2018 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Melissa.. Heartfelt appreciation.
Date: 3/11/2018 3:37:00 AM
Your imagery would have me yearning for children playing in the country, except that's what I get every weekend, and have today. It's a great life, as you have drawn it with words. A Fav of mine!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2018 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/11/2018 12:48:00 AM
wow great poem....Seren
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, Seren. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/11/2018 12:08:00 AM
Brilliant spring rhyme Line, good luck. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/11/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom. Much appreciated.
Date: 3/10/2018 9:06:00 PM
I'm in a silly mood! At the end of the 2nd stanza I thought to myself, yeah - that's about the time I would have to pee! Your poem is a delightful frolic thru a lighthearted, meaningful and blessed family day. I truly enjoyed it, like a prime Kodak moment. Sorry I got silly, it is true though - whenever I get settled to relax. TMI? All the best ... CayCay
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2018 9:56:00 PM
LOL - we must be twins. Thanks for your playful visit and comment, CayCay.

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