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Springtime, Camped Between the Mountain Valleys

Springtime, camped between the mountain valleys. Air filled with tickled laughter ventured through canopy of leaves bathed a golden hue; labyrinth fields sun's freedom to rally. An owl rides the air stream, into darkness against the fading moonlight to confront joy of flying in silence of the hunt, while crickets sing loudly in the stillness. Rumbling sounds reach deep sleep from twice its breadth, barely glean the worth turning into dreams grasping the state of mind lapsed into deep, a twilight world that knows not its own depth. Waking up in the light of morning beams, cooing sounds of mourning doves in nature's keep. 3/22/2018 Italian/Petrarchan Sonnet first 8 lines) abba abba (next 6 lines) cdecde

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Date: 5/11/2018 6:05:00 AM
Lovely piece Eve! Congratulations are in order :) xomo!
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Date: 5/10/2018 10:37:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Eve. Beautiful.
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Date: 4/26/2018 6:42:00 PM
Hello Eve, as I was reading your poem, I felt like I was on the mountain. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 4/21/2018 3:50:00 PM
Really enjoyed your sonnet. Very well written. Reminds me of my younger days when I used to backpack and hike alot. Thanks for the memories. Oliver
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Date: 4/4/2018 12:06:00 AM
I truly enjoyed your imagery, pretty sure I reached out to touch it ... Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 4/1/2018 2:16:00 PM
Love this gleaming and well crafted sonnet my friend. You have composed a golden treasure about Nature and its beauty/treasures we too oft do not see. A fav!!
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Date: 3/23/2018 8:06:00 PM
This was beautiful Eve. Very nicely penned.
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Date: 3/23/2018 10:59:00 AM
The beautiful spring in the well written Petrarchan Sonnet, Eve ...
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Date: 3/23/2018 7:49:00 AM
Well written Eve. Beautiful imagery :)
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