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Springtime.

Tiny buds awake Sweet fragrances fill the air The breath of Angels.

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Lena Townsend

Date: 4/28/2009 4:06:00 PM

A beautiful write. Congratulations on your win in the Springtime contest. It is well deserved. Smiles from Lolita

Kat Crane

Date: 4/28/2009 11:27:00 AM

Such delicate imagery. Perfect. Congratulations on your win. Kat

Constance La France

Date: 4/28/2009 9:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/28/2009 9:33:00 AM

Congrats on first place in the contest Margaret...Raul

Brian Strand

Date: 4/28/2009 8:56:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Carol's contest Meg .Rgds Brian

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/28/2009 8:36:00 AM

Congratulations on your beautiful poem winning the Spring Hiaku! ~Trudy

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/28/2009 8:16:00 AM

Congrautulations, Margaret for the wonderful winning poem, and God Bless you as you go through this difficult time. Will keep you in my thoughts and prayers. ~ Carrie

Laurie Ginn

Date: 4/28/2009 6:44:00 AM

The breath of Angels,,wonderful. Congratulations