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Spring's wisp

Spring’s wisp
strolls tenderly

slowly moving,
singing songs of:

Spring’s bright,
Spring’s warmth…
Spring’s buds stringing along mine

Spring’s snow
Slowly prods
Spring’s wisp

Spring’s wisp aches for;
Spring’s strip

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 3:09:00 PM
    Great alliteration..Enjoyed reading this one today..If for a contest, should be in the top..Sara

  1. Date: 4/26/2013 7:42:00 AM
    Sneaking up on spring... That's the way it seems to work lately. Good work... Jack

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 2:27:00 PM
    Oh, your pen drips of gold.. this is well written in such flowing motion... great stuff, james.. nice to read you again after my long absence..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 4/20/2013 8:05:00 AM
    This is Beautiful Pen... More power to the pen... Well done~A.O

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 6:06:00 AM
    The illusive spring, eh? Amazing how it comes on so suddenly - a regular explosion of green. Good to hear from you Sir James

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 12:54:00 PM
    Excellent and I echo the comments written below, all most serpentine as your poem weaves its way through the mind.

  1. Date: 4/11/2013 8:50:00 AM
    i just love this form of poetry and you do it so well James...

  1. Date: 4/1/2013 12:00:00 AM
    I love this Spring aliteration James.Happy Easter to you and Noah

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 3:58:00 PM
    This makes for very lovely alliteration, James!! And so you are apt. searching in NY? Oh, my, just what does a small apt. there go for nowadays?

  1. Date: 3/30/2013 7:20:00 PM
    Beautifully written, as if it could be set to soft music!! :)