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Spring's Wisp

. Softly Spring’s wisp strolls tenderly Sullen slowly moving singing songs of Spring’s bright Spring’s warmth Spring’s buds stringing along mine sight Sadly Spring’s snow Slowly prods Spring’s wisp Surreptitiously Spring’s wisp aches for Spring’s strip

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Date: 4/28/2013 3:09:00 PM
Great alliteration..Enjoyed reading this one today..If for a contest, should be in the top..Sara
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Date: 4/26/2013 7:42:00 AM
Sneaking up on spring... That's the way it seems to work lately. Good work... Jack
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Date: 4/21/2013 2:27:00 PM
Oh, your pen drips of gold.. this is well written in such flowing motion... great stuff, james.. nice to read you again after my long absence..:) huggs!
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Date: 4/20/2013 8:05:00 AM
This is Beautiful Pen... More power to the pen... Well done~A.O
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Date: 4/18/2013 6:06:00 AM
The illusive spring, eh? Amazing how it comes on so suddenly - a regular explosion of green. Good to hear from you Sir James
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Date: 4/16/2013 12:54:00 PM
Excellent and I echo the comments written below, all most serpentine as your poem weaves its way through the mind.
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Date: 4/11/2013 8:50:00 AM
i just love this form of poetry and you do it so well James...
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Date: 4/1/2013 12:00:00 AM
I love this Spring aliteration James.Happy Easter to you and Noah
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Date: 3/31/2013 3:58:00 PM
This makes for very lovely alliteration, James!! And so you are apt. searching in NY? Oh, my, just what does a small apt. there go for nowadays?
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Date: 3/30/2013 7:20:00 PM
Beautifully written, as if it could be set to soft music!! :)
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