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Free stock photo of after the rain, cherry blossom, cherry blossoms

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The early morning sunlight, soft and diffuse, gives way to the first strong rays of the day, the ones that bring true warmth. In this light, water evaporates in slow waves, waves that eddy in the gentle breeze, flowing upward to white-puffed clouds, ships of white in the blue above. The symphony from the trees becomes all the more powerful, as if these golden rays are their conductor's wand, and together they are the song that calls forth the spring.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ cherry blossoms bloom soft petals dance in the breeze spring’s sweet symphony

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Date: 4/6/2024 4:10:00 PM
Great word and picture portrayal Sara' Its been so wet in Britain nearly three Months of rain i'd say.? I am going to Beat the 'climate change brigade to it' And declare (it as a drought on sunshine) Its the new term..' Thats it.! And anyone not Found to be using it, shall be deemed in Denial.' Of the unreliable..Does that make Sense?? Cause it shoulden't.!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/6/2024 5:13:00 PM
thanks for stopping by, Joe. Three months of rain! I'm not sure I could endure that much. No wonder you Brits are so resilient. I like the idea of 'a drought on sunshine.' You should copyright that phrase before someone else does. Appreciate your wit this evening! :-) Sara
Date: 4/5/2024 5:25:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Sara. Words wonderfully frolicking with tenor and exuberance of spring. Much enjoyed the vibrant voice of your poem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/6/2024 5:11:00 PM
thanks, Vijay! I much appreciate your visit and kind words. enjoy your evening, Sara
Date: 4/5/2024 1:39:00 AM
A fantastic narrative and great haiku with cherry blossoms swaying in the balmy breeze. Blessings.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/5/2024 4:33:00 AM
thank you, Victor, for your supportive and kind words. You're a blessing, truly. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 4/5/2024 1:27:00 AM
You have painted an exquisite picture, offering a sensory feast. Some delicious imagery crafted with skill...had second helpings. Muted colours erupting into the strong shades of Spring.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/5/2024 4:33:00 AM
I appreciate your kindness, Jerry. Your comments are always encouraging and even poetic. I enjoy reading them. (muted colors erupting into strong shades of spring) Thank you, Sara
Date: 4/4/2024 7:22:00 PM
All three parts of your haibun fit together in perfect harmony, my friend. Well done, Sara.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/5/2024 4:29:00 AM
appreciate you stopping by, Jerry, and for noticing the harmony in my poem. Color me grateful. Enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 4/4/2024 6:16:00 PM
Beautiful pictures and love your poem, so captivating and detailed in the beauty to witness in this moment: )
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/4/2024 6:18:00 PM
awww, thank you Stephen. Appreciate your visit and uplifting words. Have a blessed evening, Sara

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