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Spring's Return

Beneath cobalt skies, An armada of petals: Praise the blinding sun.

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/9/2010 7:48:00 PM

Hey you..any chance of you coming back soon? We miss you...BG

Elaine George

Date: 8/5/2010 12:05:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku as only you can write, dear Raul. Miss you my friend and your wonderful poetry. Love, Lainie

Constance La France

Date: 8/4/2010 7:29:00 PM

Where are you Raul, miss your haiku contests and miss you~~~ Constance

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 7/11/2010 8:58:00 AM

Dear Haiku Sensei, Raul, Another great Haiku Hope all is Well with YOU and YOURS YOU haven't written anything for a couple of weeks My Prayers ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/8/2010 4:51:00 PM

Just stopping by to say "hi" Raul and that u are missed on Soup.. miss your contests of Haiku and hope u are enjoying your hiatus .. am in vacation in Hawaii too but leaving tomorrow for home .. hope u will return soon.. with luv..

Diiamond Rich

Date: 7/4/2010 3:44:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today.. I'm new to the soup so I hope you have an open mind as far as poetry. Enjoy ya day.

Phil Boy

Date: 7/3/2010 12:37:00 PM

kool write on spring B.boy

Marie Harrison

Date: 7/3/2010 6:00:00 AM

What a beautiful image you filled my head with Raul!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/28/2010 7:21:00 PM

An armada of petals...a great description Raul.. appreciate your 10th place for my entry in your Tupac contest..I have been away on vacation since June 20th at the seashore and now am in Hawaii until July 4th... so just a quick "hello" and looking forward to your new contests... keeping in touch till I return.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/27/2010 7:35:00 PM

gorgeous haiku! Raul! jimbo

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 6/27/2010 12:08:00 PM

enjoyed reading today, Are you ok? Have not heard from you lately.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 6/25/2010 1:53:00 AM

screams spring! well done! Raul! jimbo

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2010 3:27:00 PM

Great descriptive write..Keep the creative pen flowing..Yes, I believe the plants sing praises...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/24/2010 11:11:00 AM

There are so many amazing poems written and posted everyday here at PoetrySoup. The poets here grow with each poem they write. It is a pleasure to read them and I am so happy yours is among them today Raul. Love, Carol

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/24/2010 1:51:00 AM

Glad you're posting again. .lovely . .Celene.

David Byrne

Date: 6/23/2010 6:28:00 PM

like this one!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/23/2010 5:44:00 PM

It has been quite a time since you posted. Apt images for Spring's return

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/23/2010 5:42:00 PM

Love tht second line in this delightful haiku, Raul. And it's great to see you posting again. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/23/2010 4:04:00 PM

Lovely lovely, Raul!! I've missed your haiku poems !!! (I just realized I had neglected to thank you for the placement in your last contest...so appreciated the honor!...such a intense and gifted person as the subject to inspire!)

Rick Parise

Date: 6/23/2010 3:58:00 PM

a beautiful garden of endless delight! very nice ~the imagery for me was grand~Rick