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Spring's Race

Poking buds through grass Daffodils racing Tulips Capturing our smiles Written for Carol’s contest

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James Fraser

Date: 5/26/2009 2:16:00 PM

Bright spring theme, full of colourful gleam, has to be seen, on natures screen, lovely poem, James

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/28/2009 4:12:00 PM

A creative way to look at the wonderful actions of Spring. Congratulations on placing in the contest. Smiles from Lolita

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/28/2009 11:27:00 AM

Congratulations on placing in the contest! ~Trudy~

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/28/2009 10:55:00 AM

Congratulations in placing in Carol's contest! ~ Carrie

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/28/2009 9:36:00 AM

Congrats on your placement in the contest Kat...Raul

Leon Wilson

Date: 4/25/2009 2:24:00 AM

Congratulations Kat on your Haiku being featured. Fully deserved. God Bless. Leon

Date: 4/22/2009 8:19:00 AM

Just wanted to drop in and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 4/21/2009 8:52:00 AM

Congrats Kat on your haiku being featured. Vince

Abe Lopez

Date: 4/20/2009 8:53:00 PM

Kat, Congrats on having your poem featured!

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/20/2009 3:49:00 PM

Congrats on an excellent featured write of the week! Love, Shar

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/20/2009 2:57:00 PM

What a delightful Haiku you have written. God bless you. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week... Always, Dane

Sue Mason

Date: 4/20/2009 9:30:00 AM

Capturing our smiles and your wonderful haiku captures the heart, Kat. Wonderful write to be featured this week and Welcome to PoetrySoup!! Good luck in the contest and congratulations on the feature!!

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 4/20/2009 3:21:00 AM

Kat, congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Mine is also featured. Ernilando

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/19/2009 10:18:00 PM

Kat, congrats on your feature...Raul

Michael Jordan

Date: 4/19/2009 11:36:00 AM

Kat I wish you the best in the contest - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj

Brian Anderson

Date: 4/18/2009 4:55:00 AM

this is such a playful piece it is perfect for spring.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/16/2009 12:47:00 PM

Beautiful....Should it be: Capturing soft smiles (7 cyllab) since our is sung as o..ur because you did not type ou' instead. I like this haiky. all the best.

Date: 4/8/2009 8:37:00 AM

You've got me smiling with this one. Nice use of personification. I like the lighthearted feel of this poem. Good luck in the contest. Karen

Arany P.

Date: 4/8/2009 5:22:00 AM

this surely made me smile! lovely haiku ... best wishes for the contest! ~ Arany

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/7/2009 11:15:00 PM

Compelling write Kat, I like the simplicity of this nicely penned haiku...Raul

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 4/7/2009 6:50:00 PM

Beautiful haiku, Lovely images here, I can see these popping up all over...Such beauty spring brings..GB Always, Tyesha