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Spring's Muse

a hush - until I spot a thrush it brings spring when sweetly it sings I fill with joy, and dip my quill! written 11/29/14 by andrea dietrich for the WHISPERS OF A MUSE - Poetry Contest of nette onclaud

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Date: 2/1/2015 8:49:00 AM
Never too late to read one of your writes dear poet....and I see that you patiently are waiting for Spring Andrea ! ;) Beautiful write my friend......Have a blessed Sunday ! Much love, james....P.S.......I revised, 'Mine last hurra'...It is definately much better
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Date: 12/15/2014 1:59:00 AM
A nice one Andrea and a winner! Congrats on your win with this little gem!
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Date: 12/8/2014 8:49:00 AM
The beauty of spring comes from your quill, Andrea! BIG Congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/6/2014 11:30:00 PM
Congrats on the worthy win Andrea, I particularly love the last verse...huggs
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Date: 12/6/2014 6:09:00 AM
A nice broad smile lights my face. Wonderful poem, best of luck in the comp.
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Date: 12/4/2014 4:13:00 AM
Wow Andrea awesome work! Congrats on big win!
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Date: 12/4/2014 2:46:00 AM
love this, Andrea! Big congrats! :))
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:02:00 PM
I love this one...congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:21:00 AM
This is a very deserving winner, Andrea. The ending lines evoke inspiration! Congratulations! // paul
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Date: 12/3/2014 10:04:00 AM
winsome and so delicately appealing, andie... thanks for being part of my contest with bright congrats!
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:51:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS, I had faved this originally, so no surprise you placed high.
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:36:00 AM
I love it, Andrea. God bless you and happy writing ~ Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:27:00 AM
so delightful to read this again - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:25:00 AM
Hi Andrea, congratulations on your win on your very sweet entry! Would you believe, I forgot to enter my Snow Dance into the contest!!! Second time that happened to me!! Sandra
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Date: 12/3/2014 9:08:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Andrea
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Date: 12/2/2014 7:16:00 PM
Beautiful write Andrea...best wishes
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Date: 12/2/2014 6:16:00 AM
Awesome, Andrea! Are you really already thinking of spring when we haven't fully enjoyed winter's bounty and stunning ice encrusted moments?
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Date: 12/1/2014 2:10:00 AM
First stanza was my favorite - a poignant image. There's always a lovely rhythm to your words, and this one is no exception. Well done!
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Date: 11/30/2014 7:00:00 PM
The joy of seeing our avian friends is expressed well in this ode. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/30/2014 10:25:00 AM
be a tranquil lake. . . . God’s love -stronger than mountains - always surrounds you (Andrea Dietrich) Hugs XXXX rajat
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:57:00 AM
I absolutely loved this, and I read 2 meanings here, even if I should not have! :) A7
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:05:00 AM
nice, wishing you luck. ~SKAT~
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Date: 11/29/2014 11:57:00 PM
There you go, Andrea. There you go...a different take, and full of beauty. :) Good luck in Nette's contest.
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Date: 11/29/2014 10:45:00 PM
spring already I long for it's warmth Andrea this poem transports one to it's warm clines gl in contest hugs
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Date: 11/29/2014 10:31:00 PM
Splendid inspirational write Andrea!
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