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Spring's Delights

Butterflies announce spring and make every kid dance; the distant sun winks! The swift, buzzing bees seek all delectable flowers; inside lies their choice! Bright and colorful is the rainbow in the noon; see how my roses bloom! All dandelions sway... and their yellow petals stray, dawdling in the day! Dawn is a true delight, more breath-taking is sunset; breath to feel its depth! Fly, kite on light breeze; I won't let go of my string... be bold and gather speed! Tireless star-gazer, sit by the quietest river... and await rapture! Copyright 2009 by Andrew Crisci

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Date: 3/28/2009 2:10:00 AM
An exquisite SENRYU series my friend! Neat occasional rhyming and alliteration. Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/24/2009 6:27:00 AM
A splendid HAIKU series my friend! Wonderful imagery and deft word choices. Well done!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/22/2009 3:22:00 PM
Wonderful haiku series capturing the essence of my favorite season. Nice use of personification. Enjoyed this one. Thank you for sharing it. Karen
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Date: 1/22/2009 6:43:00 AM
The form for each verse is as perfect as the imagery created. Lovely! Michael
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Date: 1/22/2009 2:04:00 AM
Nice sets of hiaku and strong use of imagery...Raul
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