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Spring's Child

Sun mounts up; pink bliss flares, enters supple sapling. Purple slumber settles. Moon is unaware of the tide below. Tears squeeze from the anxious sky, spill on nervous springs. Thunder shakes a sobbing womb. Water breaks (from hidden depths) in delusional deluge. Crusted mud howls frantic sufferings, twists on agonies. Gilded bedrock cracks in twain, damp and wailing. And then – finally – she explodes; one life-bud lays soaking in the dawn of release, facing her summer muse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/22/2009 8:05:00 AM
Andrew - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Debbie's contest – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/9/2009 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in Debbie's contest! Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/9/2009 12:10:00 AM
Andrew, congratulations on your Win in Debbie's inspiring contest. Best wishes, Nigel
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Date: 12/28/2008 12:50:00 PM
wow this was beautiful Andrew, amazing write. Great job, Welcome to the soup! Blessings, ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/24/2008 8:17:00 PM
Andrew, This would be a good entry for the Beauty Way contest. It has very unique immagery. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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