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Spring Wheat

Flour Power

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/28/2010 4:38:00 AM
Great write uncomplicated simple but it is the staff of life...I enjoy most products made from flour...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 4/27/2010 6:27:00 PM
Interesting play on words. Congrats on the contest.
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:58:00 AM
Butter me a piece of bread will ya....Short and sweet...God Bless Friend...Taz
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Date: 4/26/2010 8:41:00 PM
Interesting concept, Robert. I like this. And thank you for your kind comments on my poems today. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 4/21/2010 12:30:00 PM
I like this play on words, Robert. I never would have thought of it. Good job! Regards, Gerard
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Date: 4/17/2010 9:12:00 AM
yes indeed spring is coming.Love to look at all the pretty colors.2 words can say so much.Have a good day.
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Date: 4/17/2010 8:48:00 AM
Cool...God Bless...Taz
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Date: 4/13/2010 11:33:00 AM
FUNNY PUN
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Date: 4/11/2010 2:26:00 AM
Contrags on your win, Robert. Nice angle
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Date: 4/10/2010 9:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest...cute footle...Marty
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Date: 4/10/2010 4:51:00 AM
Kool footle Robert, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >>James
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Date: 4/9/2010 10:07:00 PM
Congrats on the win my friend
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:52:00 PM
hahaha. corny(or should I say Wheaties), but I love it. congratulatons!
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Date: 4/9/2010 2:45:00 PM
Your poem and James' are quite similar, but a different meaning. Clever pun in this one, Robert. Congratulations on your success! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/9/2010 2:39:00 PM
Now Robert, Didn't I say that you didn't need my "good luck" wish?? Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest!! I thought this was really good!! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/9/2010 1:03:00 PM
Good play on words here. Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 4/9/2010 12:16:00 PM
I enjoyed this clever poem the first time I read it. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep up the good writing! Karen
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Date: 4/9/2010 8:04:00 AM
I enjoyed this one, would have placed it higher!:) Congratulations on your H.M. Robert!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/9/2010 5:25:00 AM
Congrats Robert on your HM in the footle contest.. an enjoyable read and wonderful honor for u to enjoy..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/9/2010 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's Footle contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/9/2010 12:55:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Robert.Rgds Brian.My latest contest 'EVERYMAN'S EKPHRASIS' is now open
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Date: 4/7/2010 10:42:00 AM
excellent!
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Date: 4/7/2010 5:01:00 AM
Very creative,Robert. A winner for sure! Thank you for all your kind comments. I have been away for some time now and just getting back and getting caught up. Love, Lainie
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Date: 4/6/2010 2:30:00 PM
Dear Robert, I smell fresh bread right now!! Mama's fresh baked bread...that wonderful scent wafting throughout the house..Thanks for making me recall that precious memory, today..I'll have to bake some bread this weekend!! I wish you good luck in Brian's contest..but then again, I don't believe you need it..it's a Winner..Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 4/6/2010 1:04:00 PM
So right you are! Got a chuckle out of this one. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing this enjoyable poem with us and for your comment. Have a good day! Karen
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