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Spring Upon

Winter is now over as the once icy freezing breezes subside People venturing from their homes, no longer eager to hide The sun beats down with a warm, soft comforting embrace While we rub our eyes, awakening, feeling heat upon the face A radiance of permanence is emitted from the eastern sky As morning greets us with a smile and wink of season’s eye Smell of new risen growth wafts on spring’s warmer breeze As feelings of total happiness overcome me then with ease

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/21/2008 2:19:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery in this poem. Interesting use of personification. Good job! I see you are online. Hope to hear from you soon. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 9/18/2008 4:43:00 PM
So very well written and so beautifully visual. Really enjoyed reading this one. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/16/2008 11:42:00 AM
Very uplifting poem Michael - Spring is very beautiful - Near by s Table Mountain and it is just a wonder every spring for it has the most beautiful array of wild flowers you have ever seen - God Bless
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Date: 9/16/2008 10:11:00 AM
Love all the changing seasons. Always by the end of one, we are so ready for the next. Here's to Spring. Beautiful. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/16/2008 8:34:00 AM
Lovely images of spring....we have to wait awhile for it's arrival once more, but reading this poem will make it worth the wait!! Nice one! ~Carrie
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