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Spring, the Magician

Hocus... Crocus! * Placed 3rd in Brian Strand's contest, "April Footle".

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Janice Herzog

Date: 5/31/2009 10:41:00 AM

Dear Donna: Short, but definitely way too sweet! Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you liked it. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 4/13/2009 5:48:00 PM

Very clever Donna... a two-word poem that speaks volumes! Best wishes, Keith

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 4/11/2009 4:38:00 PM

I laughed outloud. It must be the gardener in me. Congratulations on placing in Brian Strand's April Footle contest contest.

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2009 12:06:00 AM

ASWESOME!!!!!!! LOL lAINIE

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/24/2009 11:25:00 AM

Nicely penned...Raul

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/18/2009 9:21:00 AM

The bulbs do break out suddenly like that. Powerful! Love

Brandee Augustus

Date: 3/16/2009 1:12:00 PM

Very nice! It is almost deep and cute at the same time. Brilliant!

Sean Kelly

Date: 3/16/2009 2:46:00 AM

Great call , Donna ... Well done ..

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/15/2009 6:18:00 PM

Oh I remember this I loved it CONGRATS

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/15/2009 5:45:00 PM

I like this one! Truly magical... Congratulations on your win! Smiles from Lolita

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/15/2009 5:41:00 PM

Now this is terrific..I've been smiling about this one since I read it. conrats on your win. BG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/15/2009 4:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Donna! This is a wonderful Footle! Love, Robin

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 3/15/2009 3:11:00 PM

LoL!!! Someone must be ready to sit by the pond. I heard that sound before. Awesome! ~Joseph

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/15/2009 1:10:00 PM

~lol~ I never saw this! Seriously brilliant! Congrats on your win! Love, Shar

Date: 3/15/2009 1:00:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your third place finish in the footle contest to my other comment. Way to go! Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/15/2009 11:32:00 AM

I loved this one!! Yes..a bit of magic happening in springtime! ~ Congratulations on this winning poem! ~ Carrie

Amy Swanson

Date: 3/15/2009 10:42:00 AM

Very clever footle Donna! :) Congrats on your win in Mr. Strand's footle contest! Love, Amy

Brian Strand

Date: 3/15/2009 10:13:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my footle contest Donna Rgds Brian

Autumn Rose Wood

Date: 3/12/2009 2:29:00 PM

Cute.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2009 9:29:00 AM

Tulips? Julips! Love your great footle and wish you well in the contest. Carolyn

Sandra Hudson

Date: 3/9/2009 2:45:00 PM

good one....clever!-AA

Brian Strand

Date: 3/9/2009 12:47:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Donna.Rgds Brian

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/8/2009 12:23:00 PM

Good one Donna - made me chuckle - God Bless, MJ

Date: 3/8/2009 11:08:00 AM

Wow! This is such a creative slant on the contest topic. The title works so well with the poem. I think this will be in the winners circle. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen

Laurie Ginn

Date: 3/8/2009 11:07:00 AM

Oh I remember as a kid mom pointing out the crocus coming up through the snow to me they were like magic. Nice work Donna. Thanks for the memories.