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Spring Solioquy

Spring is not a book upon a shelf Some things cannot be read, just felt Feel every change of wind, rob every leaf Each grass blade has it's tale, however brief Was ever there a day like this That stretched peacefully beneath the dust Of scented hay, while shimmering haze Goes on and on in overlays Of misty blue until it ties The distant hill to distant sky? _____________________________________________________________

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/7/2013 11:16:00 AM
Carrie, a nice winning poem~Yours truly *SKAT
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Date: 3/1/2013 9:12:00 PM
Carrie, thank you very much for considering my 100 % nature contest..Congratulations in showing off Natures true after glow, always~ PD
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Date: 1/30/2012 9:26:00 PM
congrats Carrie on a big win for this creative composition on Spring.. waiting patiently for that Season luv..
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Date: 1/30/2012 5:39:00 PM
Congrats, Carrie. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Best to you and yours. luv Ralph
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Date: 1/30/2012 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in my "Spring" contest Carrie. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/2/2009 10:48:00 AM
A magnificent ode to the joys of spring, Carrie! How true that "some things cannot be read, just felt." Excellent poem!
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Date: 3/31/2009 8:29:00 PM
Thanks Carrie. This is lovely. I do wish Spring would hurry to this part of the prairies as we still have snow!
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Date: 3/28/2009 3:31:00 AM
Good morning Carrie - How have you been neighbor - Very beautiful poem that is full of love and truth - God Bless-YF4L- mj
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Date: 3/27/2009 12:02:00 PM
Carrie, this is wonderful. You have painted lovely images upon this page and I love the depth and thought provoking quality to this piece! Beautiful poetry, my talented friend!. Thank you for sharing! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/27/2009 10:18:00 AM
Loved the adventure this poetry sends me with my eyes and soul. Well arranged and also well stated. Enjoyed reading this and have a blessed day.
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Date: 3/27/2009 6:41:00 AM
a whole poem in one breath... so clear, so crystal... i could feel the wind and i could see the misty blue and thanks Carrie for appreciating my featured poem.. the family way
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Date: 3/27/2009 2:20:00 AM
Excellent last line. I love the structure too...Raul
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Date: 3/27/2009 1:08:00 AM
Like the presentational style of this on Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/26/2009 6:22:00 PM
This is beautiful my dear friend.. such loveliness flowing through the piece...I love scented hay.
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Date: 3/26/2009 4:38:00 PM
Wow Carrie, me too, one of my favs of yours. Flows like a dream along with it's detailed, glorious imagery. Feel like I am (you are) simply drifting in a euphoric state inhaling all of nature's beauty magnified. Outstanding write. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/26/2009 3:49:00 PM
Carrie, this is one of my favorites of yous..some wonderful phrases..the dust of scented hay....gorgeous. BG
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Date: 3/26/2009 1:58:00 PM
Spring Solioquy~The act of talking to oneself....or within this wonderful write it would perhaps seem to pondering or reflecting to oneself!? "Some things cannot be read just felt.... and each grass blade has its tale however brief...."~Such wonderfully beautiful, reflective and peaceful verses~speaking true volunms of the tender beauty which engulfs your priceless soul! Very Beautiful Write Carrie! My Love Always To You and Yours Loves, John!:)
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Date: 3/26/2009 1:39:00 PM
Very well penned Spring Solioquy-- it hasn't sprung yet-- but Im waiting for it :) lovely poem Carrie 10/10
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