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Spring Reigns

The skies fall with jewels In gardens digging with tools Blessed by the blossom

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Charlene Bird

Date: 4/30/2009 8:19:00 PM

This is a gem in itself, you do carve a beautiful piece! Thanks for the comment on my work, always appreciated.

Farah Chamma

Date: 4/25/2009 1:15:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku...I love the first line...It gives this strong sensation =) Thank you for sharing Farah, TYOne

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/22/2009 8:26:00 AM

Industrious hands, I see ... and as a gardner you planted a jewel in words.

Date: 4/19/2009 4:45:00 PM

What an uplifting view in this one. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind words on my haiku. Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/19/2009 1:20:00 PM

I loved the first line, the imagery is spectacular, nice job...Raul

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 4/19/2009 7:03:00 AM

Beautiful haiku, one of my favorite forms...so delightful to read as I love spring...I like (The skies fall with jewels) Nice touch with the rhyme as it is very rare. Blessings Always, Tyesha

Robin Maughan

Date: 4/19/2009 6:35:00 AM

Rare indeed! very nice.. Haiku is a challenge! Well done! Hugs, Robin

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/19/2009 6:04:00 AM

Truly magical Laura. There is no doubt you are in love with nature in this one. Love the rhyming here which is rare for haiku. Excellent. Love, Shar

Arany P.

Date: 4/19/2009 1:42:00 AM

this is a very cute little form ... and the words have surely bloomed! lovely haiku! ~ Arany