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Spring Reality

SPRING REALITY Now it all comes back That hint of heavenly warmth Those extra tree songs Busy scurry and flutter What was is suddenly gone Now it all comes back After an endless winter Explosions of green A buddy population O’er meadow and mountain stream Now it all comes back That which seemed only a dream Verdant ghostly thing I’m out the door inhaling The reality of spring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/30/2012 3:15:00 PM
One more month of it and then it's gone. Unlike winter which seems to last forever, Spring is so fleeting and as you say, it explodes on the scene. Who could say it any better? Love, Elizabeth p s , my beer of choice is Coors; don't I have good taste?! :)
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:34:00 AM
and methinks YOu are in love too my friend. WIth SPRING. (awesome poem)
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Date: 4/12/2012 4:28:00 PM
Smells good to me Daver;
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Date: 4/12/2012 12:21:00 PM
Enjoyed your Tanka series Daver, the repetitive line just adds to it.. ;) Hope your week has been a good one, love Wilma
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Date: 4/11/2012 3:14:00 PM
yes.....no it all comes back.....lovely poem Daver. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/11/2012 3:15:00 PM
sorry: noW it all comes back.
Date: 4/11/2012 10:18:00 AM
Interesting use of tanka with a repeated line. This is an unusual poem, but I will remember it.
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Date: 4/11/2012 9:06:00 AM
Wow Daver you have penned a poem all can feel even if they don't put it into words. Beautifully done !!!!Anne
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