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Spring Rain

"Spring Rain" she was named by her father Chief Many Horses. Through her veins the hot blood of the majestic Comanche courses! The young maiden crushed the hearts of many dashing braves, But to be free to chase the vagabond winds is all she ever craves! Her father willed her a handsome colt when she was but a little girl. She named him "Big Thunder" - his coat was akin to that of a pearl! Her raven hair streamed behind her as she clasped "Big Thunder's" mane! Ah! Sweet communion with Mother Earth as they raced across the plain! She preferred the buffalo hunt or spearing fish from tranquil shores, To tanning hides, preparing pemmican and other such mundane chores! Her father tutored the budding princess to assume the role of Chief. She ever looked beyond the horizon to bring her people needed relief! She fought in many battles and counted coup much to the Chief's chagrin. She could be heard shouting the "Comanche Yell" above the battles' din! Her battle cry was ever, "Great White Father, leave my people be! It is our land the Great Spirit has given us! We just want to live free" Alas, Chief Many Horses was killed in battle and she assumed his role. To smoke the peace pipe and make a better life for the tribe was her goal. Sadly, the Comanche won many battles but eventually lost the war, But Spring Rain, the only female Chief, will be remembered forever more! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 5 inConstance's "Rain, The Story" Contest - January 2011

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Date: 1/16/2011 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations on you super win in Constance's contest, Bob! Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/14/2011 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations Bob on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Rain,The Story". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:09:00 PM
Robert, it's always nice to see you in the winner circle. You write amazing stories like this one. Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/13/2011 12:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful story being 5th Place Winner in Constance's Contest, Bob. Always, Annalise
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Date: 1/13/2011 11:46:00 AM
Bob, I think I may have been "Spring Rain" in a past life. I identify with her fortitude and courage and admire her efforts to proote peace. This is a poem I won't forget. Congratulations on your win here and also on your win in the highly competitive history contest. James and I both loved your entry. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/13/2011 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Constance, Bob
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Date: 1/13/2011 4:50:00 AM
Congrats Bob.. a lovely storyl. I think I was an indian in another life..I love reading about them ...loved yourpoem. BG
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Date: 1/13/2011 3:18:00 AM
well- done with shimmering images, robert.. CONGRATS!! :)
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:03:00 PM
Many Congrats Robert on big win with this creative verse.Best wishes/Luv - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/12/2011 8:27:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your wonderful win in the Rain Story contest with this exquisite entry my friend.. a well deserved top spot win ..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 12/28/2010 4:59:00 PM
Outstanding entry, Sarge. Awesome story. Enjoyed. Good luck. Just back from Christmas with my daughters. Had a great time. Hope you guys had a great Christmas. Had a big snow storm here while I was gone (18 inches). My wonderful neighbors cleared my driveway and steps. They really look after us. You and Vera have a great New Year. Una/Ralph
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Date: 12/26/2010 7:10:00 AM
Hi Robert, what a magnificant write this is my friend. The imagery is brilliant and as many have said it reads like a real piece of history!!! Good luck in the contest. I hope our Christmas was joyus... Lay
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Date: 12/24/2010 10:29:00 PM
gosh, by adding the word "spring " to her name, you make this seems so real as if it is actual history! Is it??? I enjoyed it. LUv, andrea
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Date: 12/24/2010 5:22:00 PM
a feisty, gritty piece you created with appealing word behavior and plot... thank you for coming around, robert... just finished mine; good luvk to us in the contest.. sending you warm holiday tidings of joy! :merry christmas! :) nette
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Date: 12/24/2010 10:09:00 AM
Wonderful read Robert, it's a sure winner in my eyes. Happy Christmas to you and yours, have a lovely festive holiday....:) James..
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Date: 12/24/2010 8:07:00 AM
Bob the military e mail was dynamic.. so appreciate u thinking of us.. enjoy a blessed weekend of luv and happiness my dear friend..
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Date: 12/24/2010 7:35:00 AM
Wow! The best of luck in Constance, contest,.. have yourself a wonderful x-mass and the best new year God bless,..p.d.
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Date: 12/23/2010 7:10:00 PM
A super write and entry that am sure Constance will so luv and enjoy ..we both luv horses and this piece reflects all the contest theme required my friend.. good luck... and please join us in spirit tomorrow night for the fishes dinner and serenade too..luv..
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Date: 12/23/2010 6:56:00 PM
Fantastic and awesome story you have told with ease. I am also working on there native American myth. Bob. enjoyed the poem very much
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Date: 12/23/2010 6:22:00 PM
Love to you and yours, great write as always! Merry Christmas! Light & Love
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Date: 12/23/2010 6:11:00 PM
Good luck in the contest ...This is a good one that reads like a winner to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Your presecnce at my work lifted my spirits this eve..Sara
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Date: 12/23/2010 4:48:00 PM
Well I LOVE the story behind your poem for Constance's contest, Bob. You know I love stories about Native Americans (and I believe you have Native American blood in you). I think Constance has some Native American ancestry and will really enjoy the rise of Spring Rin to lead her tribe. Best wishes for success and it's soo nice to have you back! Merry Christmas, Bob. Love, Carolyn
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