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Spring Luna

Neath midnight blue, the crescent moon hangs low Complicit confidante, she knows my heart This lovers’ bench we shared so long ago Her and us, taking oath we’d never part Still spring perfumes of rose garden linger While hovers aura of lavish thickness He slipped a diamond ring on my finger All the while watching, she was a witness Luna, you saw my heart in two he broke You’re the one friend I trust implicitly How does sublime love just go up in smoke And newfound wings take flight exquisitely Thwarted, shattered, most fervently I plea I couldn’t bear should you too abandon me Read on air by invitation ~ May 22, 2021 'LATE NIGHT POETS' AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on August 16, 2018 for contest NEW SONNETS ONLY sponsored by EMILE PINET - RANKED 4TH

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James Inman

Date: 9/23/2018 10:34:00 AM

A lovely touching poem Line. The moon and I have had our moments as well.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/23/2018 10:50:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, James.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/2/2018 6:51:00 AM

This poem is very touching, Line, even more so when considering that (correct me if I'm wrong) it is mainly based on true life experiences. The end couplet left me all emotional. ~ Congrats on your fine win. Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2018 8:47:00 AM

Yes, Paul, someboday's life experiences, disappointments, betrayals. We'll all had our share. Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/2/2018 1:07:00 AM

This is lovely, Line, and a fave for me too. Congratulations! Viv x

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2018 6:24:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Viv.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2018 9:58:00 PM

I love this charming tribute to love and Luna, Line. I am putting this beauty into my faves! Congratulations on your deserving win Line. : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/1/2018 10:51:00 PM

I'm flattered, Connie. Thank you so much.

Emile Pinet

Date: 9/1/2018 7:31:00 PM

Congratulations Line! Your wonderful poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Very well done my friend, it was such a hard contest to judge, but your poem touched my heart my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/1/2018 9:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Emile. Most appreciated.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/17/2018 2:17:00 PM

Well done Line, best wishes...

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2018 7:02:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Charlie.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/17/2018 9:48:00 AM

The moon will never abandon you dear heart. It was made for your healing purpose. Above you it shall remain all the days of your life, Thank you for sharing your heart and your pen. Have a great day.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2018 1:15:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, Pixie. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/17/2018 12:28:00 AM

This sounds like a Coleridge Sonnet, which is the highest compliment I know Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 8/17/2018 7:29:00 AM

I am flattered. Thanks, Caren.