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Spring Is

Spring is a wide eyed child on the back of her grandfather, Old Man Winter. She bounces from snow to puddle. Spring, is a stubborn, headstrong child whose rule of life is chaos, wonder and excitement. She grows from budding to flower with every high and every low. Sometimes she launches fiery hot flashes of lightening and crashes thunder and pours down sheets of wind and rain. Spring is the sweet child that is mild, loving but, has a mysterious mischievous smirk. Spring is heart and soul, and she is young and beautiful! 02-25-2023 In Bloom Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 10/20/2023 11:19:00 AM
Beautiful poem. I like the personification. You are a talented poet!
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Date: 3/7/2023 4:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win Miranda, Very nicely done
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 3/7/2023 6:10:00 PM
Thank you for choosing this poem of mine as one of the winners.
Date: 3/4/2023 10:21:00 PM
Fantastic personification. So impressive
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 3/5/2023 5:28:00 AM
Glad you like it.
Date: 2/26/2023 1:33:00 AM
Great contrast between Winter and Spring.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 2/26/2023 6:24:00 AM
Thank you for noticing that. The idea for the contrast came when I told my husband about this contest, so we will see how I do.
Date: 2/25/2023 11:45:00 PM
A good description of spring. Well done.
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Miranda Hawley
Date: 2/26/2023 6:24:00 AM
Thank you for noticing and I am glad you think I did a good job.

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