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Spring Heat

The day once more begun With the burning of the sun Rising over shadows of night As I watch each bird take flight The heat bellows a blaze And the light leaves such a gaze Of the land and all the trees With a saviour of a breeze Out here the spring is hot Temperatures rise a lot The heat puts hold to you And all you want to do At night the air does cool We sleep just like a fool Tomorrow we see my friend The rise of heat again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/5/2015 5:22:00 PM
Philippa, This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Philippa Richardson
Date: 4/7/2018 3:22:00 AM
Hi Linda :) Thank you for the warm welcome.
Date: 10/4/2015 3:54:00 PM
Philippa, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Philippa Richardson
Date: 4/7/2018 3:24:00 AM
Hi Skat. I'm now 31 yrs old. I live, breathe and write in Melbourne Australia. A friend is a priceless gift. Thank you and nice to read your comment :)
Date: 10/4/2015 8:12:00 AM
- Welcome with your first great poem here on P-Soup, Philippa :) - Looking forward to reading more from you in the future :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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