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There once was a buff metal coil whose gal was aluminum foil. She was his sunshine. He sprang for the wine, all's swell 'till they run out of oil.

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Elaine George

Date: 3/3/2015 11:54:00 AM

Very imaginative, Deb. lol.... Yes! I am still alive and kicking. Exremely busy these days with many projects on the go...not much time for the soup....but I'll be back. Think of you often and wishing you all the best in 2015. your friend, Elane

Paul Callus

Date: 3/1/2015 9:00:00 AM

Very original, Debbie! Like how he 'sprang' for the wine! Full marks !! // paul

David Fisher

Date: 2/22/2015 7:32:00 PM

Funny, funny, funny...this deserves two boings!(which is a good thing, starting now)

Constance La France

Date: 2/19/2015 6:46:00 AM

Debbie, a fun one, great example for me to try your contest, time for me to lighten up after my recent write oh the tears and thanks for the suggestion of that site to publish my poetry, yes melancholy is me for sure and thank you for your kind comment also, so appreciated, my muse is on fire Debbie, my soul is pouring out the emotions and words and I am unable to stop the flow ~~