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Spring Flower

Sun shines on the seeds Rain bringing forth nutrients Flowers start to sprout Inspired by Carol Brown’s “Springtime” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/15/2009 12:12:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words today Lolita.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/28/2009 11:31:00 AM
Great spring poem Lena! Congratulations on placing in the contest! ~Trudy~
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Date: 4/28/2009 10:59:00 AM
Congratulation on placing in Carol's contest, Lena!! Well done!~ Carrie
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Date: 4/28/2009 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. very nice
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Date: 4/28/2009 9:40:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest Lolita...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 8:59:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Carol's contestLolita .Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/24/2009 10:52:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, haiku is my favorite form. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 3/3/2009 3:13:00 PM
Great imagery Lolita and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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Date: 3/3/2009 1:32:00 PM
Lolita, what a wonderful image you convey in this haiku! We can only hope that nature continues to nourish the seeds to bring us a colorful spring. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:14:00 AM
Spring is my most favorite season. Most excellent haiku.
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:07:00 AM
The opening line to this piece is great..love the feeling that it gave me..Best wishes and well done.
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