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Spring Fling

Spring Fling In the midst of the instinct to mate she went sniffing around for a date and once on the scent all her energy spent succumbed to spring’s arduous fate John G. Lawless 3/4/2015 submitted to – Spring Forward – Poetry Contest sponsor – Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 3/10/2015 2:38:00 PM
Great humour John - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 3/10/2015 2:16:00 PM
Nicely done, nicely won, John. GREAT meter.
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Date: 3/4/2015 11:04:00 AM
well done! this is a fine limerick...
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Date: 3/4/2015 10:18:00 AM
A very delightful write, a 7 and good luck on the contest.
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Date: 3/4/2015 9:47:00 AM
A fun frolic in the imagination that is humorous nonsense that plays with words and sets us up for a chuckle. Emile.
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Date: 3/4/2015 6:36:00 AM
Very cute John. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Janet
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John Lawless
Date: 3/4/2015 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Janet for stopping by to comment.

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