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Written: April 20, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Dappled gold shimmers in spring—wake us, A vibrant vroom, with azaleas and crocus.  Light beams teasingly stroke gossamer leaf, A concerto of nature—vow for nexus of relief. Flurries of pink blossoms twirl and sway, Wrapped in a gentle—ethereal display. Silky whispers herald the arrival of spring.  Vivid quilt—dulcet apple petals bear wing. Ariose lavender shades sway and twirl. Idle amid empyreal of a violet swirl. Aphonic purple eclipse—ambrosian and bright. Aureate with a heavenly elixir of light. As sun rises—crimson adorns the sky. A vivid shade that all creation ally. Meadows brimming with daisies bloom. Tulips are twirling as the beat resumes.  Oh, the blooms—of shooting stars. A mist of hues, strewn, drills us from afar. They acquire cyan from a sky of sapphire. Curvaceous canorous chorus colors never tire. Teardrops in woodlands spawn.  Nature's sorrow —silently drawn.  Whispering trees, their branches weep,  As the tears from heaven balmily seep, Whispers of snowdrops, delicate and fair,  Adorned by moon ethereal glare. Blithely beauteous, buxom, and bright,  Crowning the night with esoteric light.

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Date: 4/21/2024 6:34:00 PM
Hello Sotto, I really love how each stanza is a brushstroke in nature's masterpiece. Dappled gold and vibrant vrooms usher in a season of renewal, where every blossom and leaf becomes a note in the concerto of life. I can see the swirling blossoms and lavender evoke a sense of ethereal beauty, while the crimson sky and teardrops in woodlands of nature's ever-changing moods. What a wonderful tribute to the delicate dance of the seasons, Sotto. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/21/2024 2:01:00 PM
Ahh!! Delightfully expressive of spring's floral beauty. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thank you for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 4/21/2024 1:03:00 PM
"Spring Exhibition" paints a vivid and enchanting picture of nature's beauty, using rich imagery and lyrical language to capture the essence of spring and its vibrant hues. Its delicate descriptions of blossoms, ethereal light, and serene landscapes evoke a sense of wonder and renewal. Loved it! Don
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Date: 4/21/2024 6:04:00 AM
outstanding spring imagery, dear Sotto, as well as some delightful alliteration (Blithely beauteous, buxom, and bright) You've painted a breathtaking masterpiece with the strokes of your pen. especially liked "Vivid quilt—dulcet apple petals bear wing." Our apple tree is blossoming! Hooray. Enjoy your Sunday, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 4/21/2024 5:18:00 AM
Among your best my friend. Splendid spring imagery shines in its glory--a symphony of colors adorn your poem, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/21/2024 1:59:00 AM
Wow a marvelous nature poem with lots to take in, like painting in words. Kudos! >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<^^^^^^^^*> Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
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