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Spring Clings

Splendiferous skies Sunflower sunrise haystacks of lilacs pastel daisies play with robins and jays fragrant grass finds bunny behinds cotton lambs coo earth's lush rebirth a spring dream until my face hits a clinging bug filled web 3/09/21 Poem of the Day 3/11/21

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/1/2021 3:38:00 PM

Yicks, !!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/30/2021 4:13:00 PM

Those webs are no fun at all. Very descriptive work. I have enjoyed reading these in the past but haven't written one in quite some time. I will have to try my hand at them again soon. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/5/2021 8:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your on. A wonderful spring write. Please, no bug filled webs. Have a blessed day/week..........

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2021 9:11:00 AM

Those spider webs are awful aren't they. Enjoyed reading your creative work that has been featured for POTD. Congrats on this excellent winner. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/30/2021 12:57:00 PM

lovely, Michelle. Congrats on your POTD ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/23/2021 12:09:00 PM

Wonderfully done! Congrats on POTD with this terrific diminished hex.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/20/2021 6:23:00 AM

Hi Michelle, Back in circulation have had 2 nightmare weeks - my husband had a major operation and then strict recuperation was imperative - still not completely well but thank God he is on the mend. An awesome poem, blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 3/18/2021 1:36:00 PM

Very cute!!! Loved it!

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/14/2021 9:10:00 PM

I can just imagine seeing the fly with the human head stuck in the web and crying "help me". Great write.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2021 7:42:00 PM

And the spider's thinking 'Look at the size of that bug!' Thanks for the fun comment, Robert~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/14/2021 8:25:00 AM

How did I miss this wonderful write as POTD?! I must be going blind or something. I think that the way you 'diminished the hexaverse' magnifies exponentially the impact of this poem! Congrats, Michelle! :) gw

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2021 7:43:00 PM

It is a fun form to write, thanks for your return visit, gw :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/13/2021 8:26:00 PM

I dont like spiders either, but love your poetry, this is a gem.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2021 7:44:00 PM

You are too kind, and I am a big fan of yours too, thanks harry :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/13/2021 5:54:00 PM

Lol! Michelle, What a splendid “fun” spring write read on today. Got to watch those webs! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day evening:-) Alexis

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2021 7:44:00 PM

Yes, spring has more than birds and bunnies!

J. Summers

Date: 3/12/2021 4:09:00 PM

Good form and I like the humor at the end. Congratulations on receiving POTD. John

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2021 7:45:00 PM

Hi John, thank you for the comment, appreciate it~

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/12/2021 5:39:00 AM

Hi Michelle, beautiful poem and congratulations on potd...

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2021 7:48:00 PM

Thank you, Akkina~

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/11/2021 7:15:00 PM

Love this... stunning. I love love love it. Congrats on POTD and God bless you. Love, Gina

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2021 7:48:00 PM

Thank you very much, Gina!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/11/2021 6:32:00 PM

"bunny behinds and cotton lambs coo" I am smiling and giggling at the same time. :) Everything is peachy, until you slam into that sticky spider web. Yuck ! I know many of us can relate. Congratulations Michelle, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2021 7:47:00 PM

You gotta watch out for those webs - thanks for your comment, Brandy~

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 3/11/2021 4:07:00 PM

Hi Michelle! This is beautiful and funny at the same time! Congrats on POTD!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/16/2021 7:46:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Jennifer~