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Spring Cleaning

Fresh sweat runs down from eyes to chin a foamy day launders hand with air’s foam, washing the slime of April's gray mould and dressing up a brightened face to roam. Brooms of nature scrub old clay mopping fields as skies polish new trees. Prayers stem from fingers rinsed by dew, till ocean cleanses itself from soiled grease. A merry dawn radiates on meadows green serenading young bouquets kissed by winds. Oh, soft rhapsody of cherubs bathes the light chanting praises of joy this fine season brings. At last, renewed spirit buffs old whiskers when May's verdant carpet spreads the sun. Heaven peeps from afar with warm delight for joyful spring's cleaning rites, finally spun!

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Date: 3/24/2014 8:47:00 AM
Nette What a creative and interesting write. The imagery and descriptiveness pulls this poem together. Thanks for the nice comment on my Racism poem.
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Date: 5/5/2012 3:15:00 AM
Nice nice win on a nature's cleaning day! Everything in it is beautiful...brooms of nature scrub old clay!! You sure are awesome! Congrats, Nette. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 5/4/2012 11:22:00 PM
way to go, nette with your win. It's not easy to get on brian's lists and this is well deserved.
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Date: 5/4/2012 11:20:00 AM
Congrats Nette on your win!Another beauty from you.
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Date: 5/4/2012 9:21:00 AM
A really beautiful to frame the coming spring, Nette.. huge congrats for you :)
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Date: 5/4/2012 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in "Contest 174" Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2012 1:39:00 AM
Oh yes spring is on the way you should see my windows now the sun has reached them again. love this. Thanks for your lovley comments sorry if I am missing some of your works but life has a nasty habit of getting in the way xx
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Date: 3/9/2012 8:23:00 PM
Hey, honey, just primo stuff. Francine will love this, as I do, I'm sure! Thanks for your comments, Doll! I am plugging a long right now. You reminded me to get back into my regime-- I have golden seal in the fridge I've been meaning to take. I REALLY believe in natural healthcare, too. It's amazing what the world provides in herbs and foods to cure us. I think I have a slight case of S.A.D. -- which usually hits me in February. THe girl is sunny- so she keeps me happy, usually. Just sick...
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Date: 3/9/2012 5:16:00 PM
Nice write Nette , was shampooing my lounge carpet yesterday :) Hugs and best wishes , Declan xxx
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Date: 3/9/2012 3:58:00 PM
what a great spring cleaning poem Nette. Wonderful. Sorry for your difficulties here lately!! I'm just getting ready to go off very soon so it's nice to catch you here for a moment!
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Date: 3/9/2012 3:32:00 PM
Wow, Nette, this is truly a pleasant write that I have had the pleasure of reading! All the cleaning that went on here in Spring brings to mind all the Spring cleaning that I have to do, yuck! Why'd you have to bring all that up, ha ha! Your poem is full of wonderment and the spirit belonging to that of Spring! I love your write a lot that I have read this evening my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 3/9/2012 2:23:00 PM
Beautiful written nette, thank you for visit my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/9/2012 2:17:00 PM
a wonderful energetic write Nette luvc.. good luck in contest.. now if u are free fly to Italy and bring these words to my villa and we will spring clean together luv.. my surgery is March 22nd.. thankxx for asking.. sorry for tech issues.. the ste seems slow and slower .. oh...
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Date: 3/9/2012 2:00:00 PM
Very nice poem nette...enjoyed reading...good luck in the contest...Marty
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