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Spring Mermaids

SPRING MERMAIDS The empty sky over the forest is silent, But soon the call of distant spring will arrive And the myriad bluebells who went Away last summer will once again thrive, Spreading to every shady cranny and nook Over the floor of our leafy sea. These tiny blue mermaids by the brook, Heads bent shyly in softly whispered glee, Will speak to me again, as we take our ease: I’ll breathe in their earthy growth From the lush sward around the trees And spring’s warmth will fill us both. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written by Sydney Peck 28 January 2102 for Carol Brown’s Contest SPRING

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Date: 1/31/2012 2:08:00 PM
LOL do you know what I am going to say [besides it is charming and wonderfully rich with color!] yup sonnet. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/30/2012 5:51:00 PM
Congrats, Syd. Excellent piece. Enjoyed. Nice going. Best to you and yours. Ralph
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Date: 1/30/2012 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your great win in my "Spring" contest Syd. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/28/2012 8:35:00 PM
Sydney, check out Susan's contest on "lost jewels" surely you have an oldie that is REALLY good and few people have seen it. I found a few that had 8 comments and I used one of those for an entry. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/28/2012 8:34:00 PM
WOW, blue(belles!) as mermaids!!! I LOVE this. It has that classic feel that I so admire in the old time writers!!
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