Spring

A chill creeps quickly along my body as the wind whips along its way...But ...it...is...a light breeze...barely noticeable by most.. Sounds of birds chirping is everywhere... The smell of fresh cut grass is consumed in ones senses... Sights of beauty take shape in the form of children at play...people walking, talking. Spring is finally here... It takes away the harsh winter blues... And brings sweet happiness... Spring...is...here!

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/26/2015 8:39:00 PM

Looking forward to spring for sure!!!!!! Lovely poem!

Meg Anderson
Date: 4/27/2015 12:21:00 PM

Awe thank you! It sure took forever! I have really grown to hate NY weather! lol

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/23/2015 10:36:00 AM

Spring had sprung and it seems meg so have you! Enjoyed reading this wonderful write!

Meg Anderson
Date: 4/23/2015 12:12:00 PM

awe thank you... the winter was getting me down. I needed Spring to hurry up and get here!

David Meade

Date: 4/20/2015 8:40:00 PM

Spring indeed -- it's the small things that brings us great joy . . . your words filled my heart with joy tonight. Missed ya!! 7

Meg Anderson
Date: 4/21/2015 6:49:00 AM

David my dear thank you! I know I have been busy! but it was a beautiful weekend I was outside the whole time and got inspired by the natural beauty in nature! Missed you too! take care!

Wally Flint

Date: 4/18/2015 9:25:00 PM

Meg - I like the way you start off with the chill of the wind, then move to happier aspects of spring. I continued to feel that chill throughout the rest of the poem, and that made me feel the other aspects of spring all the more! A 7 for you girl!

Meg Anderson
Date: 4/19/2015 4:46:00 PM

Wally, thank you! It has been a long harsh winter where I live and I am finally enjoying this long awaited Spring!