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Spring

Spring; my second least favorite season Hay fever, runny nose and sneezing is my reason The moment flowers begin to bloom Kicks off my discomfort and overall gloom Everyone else sees the beauty of this season I only see my body’s treacherous treason Flowers bloom, sneeze, sneeze, sneeze Head so stuffy I can barely think, Morning dew, fresh cut grass, afternoon breeze Sneeze, sneeze, sneeze, they always come in threes.

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 6/9/2016 9:01:00 AM

Congrats Carmen, for your placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/13/2015 7:53:00 PM

Oh yes, I understand this very well. The pollen gives me hives to go along with all of the others. Love the sun, but can't be out in it for long during this time of year.

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 3/16/2015 8:32:00 AM

Thank you !

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/13/2015 3:37:00 PM

You poor thing! I know a lot of people in your shoes. You did an excellent job writing about Spring and your allergies. Sure hope you feel better soon. Love, Kim

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 3/16/2015 8:32:00 AM

Thank you ! its a yearly thing and now I'm use to it and am prepared..