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Spring After the clouds broke on the shimmering puddle Streaky sunshine danced 6/26/2014

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/10/2014 11:25:00 AM

Amazing imagery...PD

David Mohn

Date: 6/29/2014 8:12:00 PM

Love the visual John...congrats

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/29/2014 3:58:00 PM

a lively dance of a 'ku, john.. amazing !cheers to you on your fine win.. hugggs

Donna Jones

Date: 6/29/2014 1:09:00 PM

Puddles after a spring shower...awesome! Congratulations

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/29/2014 11:21:00 AM

Hi John, this is such a beautifully descriptive write! Huge congratulations to you on your great win! Warmest regards.

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/29/2014 9:13:00 AM

congrats on a great win, John... hugs.. Arlene

Elaine George

Date: 6/29/2014 6:13:00 AM

You have painted a very vivid picture with this spring Haiku. Many congrats on your win. Elaine

John Lawless
Date: 6/29/2014 7:37:00 AM

Thanks for reading and checking in Elaine, always appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/28/2014 11:56:00 PM

oh gosh, I skipped right over yours as I went down my winner list giving congrats.Good thing I looked it over one more time. Yours was sure a cute little haiku, John. I liked the alliteration and the original thought of that last line. congrats in my contest (a suggestion for you. don't capitalize the lines. Well, if you ever try to publish, they won't take them that way. I'm trying to spread the word on that!!)

John Lawless
Date: 6/29/2014 7:37:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for the info on the caps and thanks for your support.

Jack Horne

Date: 6/25/2014 4:33:00 PM

love this haiku!

John Lawless
Date: 6/29/2014 7:38:00 AM

Thanks Jack, I tend to struggle with these little pesky forms.