Spring

march winds gust - gorse clings on tightly whilst daffodils sway

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2014 11:42:00 AM

a great one for march!!

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 4/6/2014 4:18:00 AM

I' ll post it my blog vcobor.blogspot.gr, If you don't have any objection.

Linda Jackson
Date: 4/6/2014 8:01:00 AM

Glad you like it. Best wishes

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 4/6/2014 4:17:00 AM

spring - like and an authentic hailu, like the ones written by the Japanese. Bravo

Linda Jackson
Date: 4/6/2014 8:00:00 AM

Thank you I try to make a picture.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/5/2014 8:05:00 AM

- Ohhhh... love it, Linda !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/5/2014 7:52:00 AM

Lovely haiku Linda...you can feel spring in the air. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2014 3:44:00 AM

Fantastic Haiku - love this time of year - you have summed it up perfectly for me with the daffodils and gorse. Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/16/2014 6:12:00 AM

Am so pleased you commented back - have been telling hubby about this poem when we were driving over the hills last weekend and the gorse really was 'clinging on' with the last remnants of flowers - now I can make it a favourite! Hugs Jan x

Linda Jackson
Date: 4/16/2014 6:06:00 AM

Thank you x.