Spring

Awakening tears Cascade to the melting pot Incensed with jack pine

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2011 8:08:00 PM

Congrats Randy on a fantastic win with these brilliant words luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/22/2011 11:20:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Randy

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/22/2011 10:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in John Moses Freeman's contest "Power Of Observation" Randy. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 7/22/2011 8:40:00 AM

Randy, Also with graces provided, you did well in gracing the sponsor. Congratulations on your accomplished endeavor! Agape, Moses

Roxanna Johnson

Date: 7/21/2011 10:33:00 AM

Very beautiful <3

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/18/2011 11:49:00 AM

an aromatic adventure Randy in this Haiku.. Spring is a lovely season.. beautiful words ...luv..

Stephen Parker

Date: 7/18/2011 7:39:00 AM

A riveting description of encroaching Spring! I love the first line, "Awakening tears". It so aptly describes the seasonal rains which begin during the early Spring season. Also, in the second line, you nicely bring in the mid to late Spring heat. Enjoyed your well-crafted poem.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/18/2011 7:08:00 AM

enjoyed reading today!! Keep sharing your wonderful writes with us! Have a restful evening!