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Spread My Wings

Faith has been broken Tears must be cried If only I walked away Sooner then later Did you shake me up Or did I just bring you down Can we make each other happy Will we break each other down Did we both jump into the fire And not even care what came One of these days I'll spread my wings And fly away from you Then we both can be happy

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 4/22/2017 6:00:00 PM

This was written four years ago. You have covered a lot of ground since then, and much of it was in the air.

... Gigno

Date: 2/10/2013 10:17:00 AM

!!!

James Foulk

Date: 6/11/2011 9:21:00 PM

this was a very creative piece you wrote, and i would have thought it really happen to you, that is how real it was, i give it a ten, but we can only go up to 7. you do have a gift so don't ever stop writing. thank you for commenting on Bring on Summer. Summer vacation was something i looked forward to every year, as even kids today do also, each summer brigns on a new memory.

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/5/2011 6:22:00 PM

Trust me on this one Debbie: Run....It's not worth the pain if someone makes you feel this way. R.M.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 5/11/2011 1:30:00 PM

This is made up out of my head,, if I had a relationship like this I would run;} I'm single ,,,,,,,,,,;} thank you for reading it ;}