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Spraying Beauty

Spraying Beauty The burnished yellow sky crackles loud Opening the golden gates of its honeyed dome Freeing the invisible wind to cycle through the yellow mustard fields Spraying its trails with scent and freshness of panoramic beauty March 4, 2016 Contest: United Colours - Yellow Sponsor: Silent One

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:33:00 PM

Balveen, Congratulations on your awesome win. Love LINDA

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:26:00 PM

Thanks Linda!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/7/2016 7:16:00 AM

I wish I could see that beautiful imagery with my own eyes!!!! Congrats Balveen, for your placement in the Yellow Contest!!! ;-)

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/15/2016 8:27:00 PM

How sweet of you, Teddy! Thanks!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2016 4:25:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/6/2016 7:24:00 PM

Thanks Jan! Love....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2016 12:55:00 PM

YOU wrote a very nice one. Congrats on the win.

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/6/2016 7:25:00 PM

Glad you found it nice!

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 3/6/2016 12:12:00 AM

Congratulations Balveen on your win in the UNITED COLOURS: Yellow Contest! You deserve it! :) -HANS

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/6/2016 8:50:00 AM

Thanks Hansteven!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/6/2016 5:57:00 AM

Thanks Hansteven!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/5/2016 2:35:00 AM

This is so lovely Balveen. It would be a top winner had you remembered to put the number of picture, I am sure. I also wrote a longer poem and had to shorten it. It kind of took away from the feeling I wanted. I posted the longer version that makes more sense now that this contest has been judged. Congratulations! #7

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/5/2016 10:00:00 PM

Thanks for showing your loving concern, Connie! Love you! Balveen