Spooky Night

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Kids are ready With costumes on It's very dark already And the night is drawn Dreams of candies In their heads dance Grabbing their bags They take a chance Spooks are about Witches fly by Without any doubt The ghosts are out! Spooky things tonight This is Halloween night! Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2005 October,27,2014

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/29/2014 10:44:00 AM

Children will take a chance ... as long as they are in a group, fear is overcome! Enjoyable read, Dorian. /x/ paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 9:29:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Paul,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/28/2014 3:07:00 PM

I can see that you are going to have a fun Halloween.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 9:29:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,M.L,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/28/2014 7:20:00 AM

I see you have dug up this beauty from the past. How appropriate for the season.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 9:28:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Richard,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)D.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/27/2014 11:56:00 PM

Halloween chill and pranks...well-written D..love))) rajat

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 9:28:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Rajat,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/27/2014 8:13:00 AM

U really rock wid this one Dorian! Gl in contest! I too hv titled my poem as spooky night written three days back! Sweet coincidence!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 9:27:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Dr. Upma,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D