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Theme: Spontaneity

Title: Spontaneity

Host: Unseeking Seeker

Date submitted: February 27th 2024

I got lost again in childlike wonder Looked for seashells while listening to thunder The rain it came soaked me to the core I paid it no mind while exploring the shore I removed my clothes too wet to wear Laughed and skipped danced without a care The troubles of the world slipped from my shoulders My adult responsibilities and mountain of folders On a secluded beach with childlike glee I discovered the essence of who I used to be.

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Don Iannone

Date: 3/13/2024 6:53:00 AM

Richard, your poem perfectly captures the age-old wisdom: when life gives you thunder, just look for seashells! It's a delightful reminder that sometimes getting lost is the best way to find yourself—preferably while dancing half-naked in the rain. ~Don

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/13/2024 9:59:00 AM

Much appreciated Don. Thanks for the visit.

Valsa George

Date: 3/7/2024 9:41:00 PM

Enjoyed the retracing of your foot steps back to your childhood days! An empty beach, sea shells strewn on the sea strand, a sudden rain drenching you through...! Your natural instinct of dispensing with the baggage of rain-soaked clothes and running nude as a child. What spontaneity, what child-like freedom! Lovely poem. Congratulations dear Richard on your great win.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2024 10:05:00 PM

I’m pleased you enjoyed it.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/7/2024 12:07:00 PM

Richard, this poem is so filled with "childlike glee!" Perfect wording. Great cadence through your rhymes. Your words just sparkle like spring rain. Congratulations on your win! Blessings!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2024 3:42:00 PM

What a nice surprise. Thanks for your kind comment.

Karen Jones

Date: 3/6/2024 11:47:00 PM

This is delightful and insightful about the effects of the sea on me too! Congratulations on your high placement in the contest Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2024 3:42:00 PM

Much appreciated.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/3/2024 4:27:00 AM

Dear Richard, you beautifully capture the essence of rediscovering childlike joy amidst life's storms. It livens the soul, showing me to find peace in simple wonders. This is a heartfelt piece—it reignites memories of innocence and freedom, grounding me in the present moment. - Blessings, Daniel

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/3/2024 7:30:00 AM

Thanks for reading. In reality I did not have that time of innocence. It is a construct of my imagination. I am thankful for imagination.

Maria Williams

Date: 3/1/2024 8:54:00 PM

Its always wonderful to go back to where you spent your happiest times as a child. I do it quite often. Great poem Richard ...Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2024 11:39:00 PM

Thanks and a big hug back to you.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 2/28/2024 8:27:00 PM

Richard, this is simply delightful. Love how you captured childhood wonderment and joy. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/1/2024 11:40:00 PM

Thanks so much Cecilia. ;0)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/28/2024 8:03:00 PM

Delightful and delicious, Richard... Only one question: I was with you all the way there as you shed your adult trappings... right up until you wrote 'of whom.' ~ Ahem, Pete R. Pan

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/27/2024 8:09:00 PM

It’s great to get away, rediscover childlike wonder!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2024 8:50:00 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/27/2024 5:06:00 PM

the perfect poem for the contest. Your poem showed us adults how to reclaim our spontaneity! I love the image of the mountain of folders. So true. Best wishes with the contest, Richard. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2024 5:38:00 PM

You as well Sarah, thanks for reading and commenting.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/27/2024 12:54:00 PM

very touching and well-written, richard! best of luck in the contest...

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2024 12:56:00 PM

Thanks Ilene. ;0)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/27/2024 11:39:00 AM

So sad. Peter Pan grew up too. I say always be able to go back to childhood. A very positive poem.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2024 12:57:00 PM

Good comparison. Thanks for reading.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/27/2024 10:27:00 AM

This piece exudes creativity and brilliance, a truly heartwarming and beautiful poem. It offers a unique perspective, and I wish you the best of luck.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/27/2024 12:57:00 PM

Thanks Sotto.