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Spontaneity

Line of inquiry from Unseeking Seeker: "discarding narrow thought flow crutch we learn directly by soft touch and what we garner we relay to the vast void in childlike play entwined thus with the universe we dance without need to rehearse" _______________________________________________ Ahhh, Spontaneity! How wonderful it is. It separates adults from children more often than not. It’s that magical quality which often seems to me that some people in their older age simply have forgot! Spontaneity . . . Maybe it’s the essence of authenticity when you can be yourself and say exactly what you think. Maturity can keep us from being much too blunt, yet spontaneity can be subtle like a winsome wink. Spontaneity . . .Imagine yourself when young. How easily you laughed; how happily you simply played. Sadly, it’s not that way for kids from homes of terror, yet I hope that most of us recall impulsiveness we once displayed. Did you hop onto your bike, riding anywhere without a care? Did you ever jump into a pond where tadpoles swam - trying to catch them while cupping them in your small hands? Did you grab an apple off a neighbor’s tree, then have to scram? Did you play with tiny cars or trucks, causing them to crash? Did you pretend your doll was you and then converse with your best friend’s dolly as if that doll were her? Did you make up little plays you never did rehearse? I did all those things and more. It was a different time. I could run, play ball, and all through town I’d roam with friends or siblings. How we laughed and had such fun. It was not till darkness fell we even would go home. Today kids have to be more careful, yet I see them play showing imagination like when as a child I did. Were you like me, and do you ever dream about today those fascinating things that you dreamed of as a kid? Unfortunately as adults, we have a lot of rules. Rule are necessary, but we must not let the rigidity of them replace the joy of having fun. The inner child in all of us we must not forget. Spontaneity . . . Reclaim what you may have lost. Calm your mind; lighten up; laugh and smile more. Embrace creative thinking; be as honest as you can. The child inside of you is one you never should ignore!

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Date: 3/9/2024 2:57:00 PM
Very precise and detailed view on spontaneity. I loved every breakdown. Success on the contest dear.
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Date: 2/28/2024 12:37:00 PM
Andrea, I think you covered the subject in a lot of detail that I can relate to. The nice thing about PS is that we get to be that way at least in what we write!
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Date: 2/28/2024 9:45:00 AM
When we were young and carefree, spontaneity used to guide our actions. With age, we have to think twice. Nice work.
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Date: 2/27/2024 10:14:00 PM
Sound advice, Andrea. Superb narrative that creates a very vivid picture in the mind of childhood joys. A cautionary tale about valuing those things we should never take for granted. Best of luck with this Howard
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Date: 2/27/2024 10:11:00 PM
i admire your spontaneity tackling this message in the arts...one reading you know "spontaneity" iz inherent in you vs impulsive...yep ') much love vooman
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Date: 2/27/2024 8:02:00 PM
Oooooooo, I love this happy outlook, Andrea! It's a shame I have to remind myself of my age sometimes, when I want to do something childlike, that might be considered "silly..." We weren't allowed to be noisy when my father was at home, so we made up for it when he wasn't! Playful times were also wondrous learning times too-thank you for the pleasant memories encapsulated in this wonderful poem... Fav for me to save... <3
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Date: 2/27/2024 5:45:00 PM
As kids spontaneity was the rule, But as we get older we are more cautious, Nicely penned Andrea
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Date: 2/27/2024 4:44:00 PM
metaphorical poem with wisdom and insight within your rhythmic verses. Reading your poem was a joy in that it reminded me that at one time in my life I nurtured spontaneity, even as a teacher. Doing so engaged my students and kept me creative. Now I think I'm this stoic ol' fuddy duddy. You offer some wise words. Nicely done for the contest. hugs, Sara
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Date: 2/27/2024 4:23:00 PM
So well well-crafted metaphoric poem about spontaneity, Andrea. Your poem is truly remarkable! The deliberate arrangement of its verses, complemented by skillful employment of rhyme, imbues your words with profound significance. Best wishes for the contest
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