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Spoilt Brat Footles

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‘Princess’ in mess Flicks hair - Beware Bad mood Is rude She whines At times She pouts And shouts Mummy … DUMMY!!!!!!!!!! Stamps feet Retreat! Can clout – Watch out! Prissy Missy Spoilt brat – Hate that! 5th June 2015

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/19/2017 8:53:00 AM

Nice one, Jan:) great example for your contest, never tried out these before, but you are an expert:)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/19/2017 5:39:00 PM

I'm no expert Jo i just love this form and have such fun with the humour and find them simple to write:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/7/2015 8:10:00 PM

Love the picture, love the footles, love your humor! All kids have their moments but some are worse than others...mine are angels all the time...LOL. Hugs, Rhonda

Jan Allison
Date: 6/8/2015 1:43:00 AM

Thanks for the comment Rhonda - do hope you will join in with the fun in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Peter Dome

Date: 6/6/2015 2:49:00 AM

Your majesty Footie Queen. I've seen many brats on my travels my younger sister was one. loved this. the picrure is so appropriate. well done best wishes. your knight in rusty armour. Sir Peter. a 7.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2015 2:52:00 AM

Peter I hope you will think about entering the contest or at least penning a few footles for fun:-) Hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 6/6/2015 1:37:00 AM

Jan the queen of funny, back to read your awesomeness

Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2015 2:10:00 AM

I have been called the 'queen of footles' and 'mistress of mirth' but as you know i have encountered a 'blockage' and it has lead to a run of crap poems lol - oh I hope I can always laugh at myself:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/5/2015 10:30:00 PM

my crown - bow down ....the footle queen

Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2015 2:07:00 AM

I understand Tim life issues take precedent - there will be more contests to come in the future:-) Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 6/5/2015 10:41:00 PM

hope it doesn't fill to quickly..wont be able to get to it until Monday night or Tuesday

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 10:36:00 PM

Do you remember the fun we had collaborating on our footles poem Tim lol - I do hope you will join my new contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Thomas Martin

Date: 6/5/2015 10:29:00 PM

ROFL, Jan. Sowell chosen rhymes!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 10:35:00 PM

I do hope you will join in my contest Thomas - I posted this to give people the idea of what I am looking for - this only took me 5 mins to write:-) So few words can say so much! :-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 6/5/2015 4:52:00 PM

Hi Jan...this is a great set of footles and a perfect picture to compliment it. You're good at these...you fell in love with footles straight away when you first wrote them several months back! Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 5:32:00 PM

I did fall in love with the form Paul - I guess that is why I find them so simple and fun to write - the humour aspect really appeals to me and so few words really can paint a big picture - hope you join in my contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/5/2015 3:52:00 PM

So cool, Jan! Love the way you did this! Hope I can get inspired for your contest! Hugs, 7, Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 4:10:00 PM

I am sure you will do something brilliant Sandra - it really is a very simple yet effective form - this took me about 5 minutes to write at school yesterday and i have also written another about a teenage boy which I will post soon:-) Hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 6/5/2015 3:52:00 PM

Jan, these footles do tell a story, a sad story of a mean spoilt brat the picture is great, a wonderful 7 and great inspiration for your footle contest

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 4:08:00 PM

Glad you like it Broken wings - hope it inspires you to pen a few fun ones for the contest - the more you do the funnier it is and it really is a very simple and effective form:-) cant wait to see what you come up with:-) hugs jan xx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 6/5/2015 3:20:00 PM

This is what comes from real inspiration, when I fell the heat---the poem gets a 7

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Jerry:-) i do hope you will enter my footles contest:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/5/2015 1:36:00 PM

Oh yeah I can relate to every word!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 1:51:00 PM

lol refers to little onesas well as teenagers I guess lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2015 1:08:00 PM

I feel for the person living with this teen with the attitude also for her future husband.Thanks for stopping by my blog..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 1:30:00 PM

I wrote the poem when i was at school yesterday - i have lots of inspiration from people watching lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2015 12:32:00 PM

.... Perfect ..... I have to laugh at your 'Princess' in mess :) - Happy weekend, Jan! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 12:40:00 PM

I wrote this at school yesterday morning - have done another about wreckless boys! Hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/5/2015 8:51:00 AM

The picture is perfect! It did justice to your footle! haha...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thanks Kim - heads up footles contest will be coming - hope you participate:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/5/2015 8:30:00 AM

Oh yes you truly paint the pictures here..love these...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2015 12:24:00 PM

Thanks Harry I had fun with this one - wrote it at school yesterday morning when i was sitting in an exam waiting for students to need my help with reading and no one did - wrote 3 poems and studies for my food safety course... and a poem came from that too :-) Hugs jan xx