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Spoilt Brat

A soft spring breeze blows gently across the open toes of my Italian leather sandals. Sitting on the weathered oaken bench I can picture you swinging on those wooden slat swings with your flowing hair pushed back in a ponytail bouncing up and down off the top of your cashmere sweater I imagine your little smile as you giggled with your girlfriends I can still see that little twinkle in your eye as you caught me staring at you I smiled and my cheeks turned a pinkish red I remember walking over your way and asking your name You said it was Spoilt Brat and I couldn't help laugh We took a walk as all your friends watched You were so bold, grabbing my hand and starting to run We ran so fast and then fell helplessly in the grass You touched my faced and pulled me in and we kissed, oh such a wonderful kiss so soft and light. you lit up my night Such beautiful memories coming back to me on this sunny spring day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/22/2015 9:04:00 AM
Cute. The title as well as the way the poem was written speaks of youthful verve and vivacity. what a lovely poem you have here, Tim. a well-deserved POTD. Congratulations! Hugs! :) Kim
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:35:00 PM
I enjoyed the unique presentation of the past event, the way the "character" remembers the event. Beautifully written! Congratulations on the poem of the day!
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Date: 3/18/2015 7:02:00 PM
A wonderful sensitive and romantic poem, Tim. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Sandra
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Date: 3/18/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Sandra...hugs Tim
Date: 3/18/2015 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations Tim on the poem of the day honor. Well done.
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:56:00 PM
Thanks Robert
Date: 3/18/2015 5:45:00 PM
I'm in love...with this poem...nicely written. I love those kind of memories. Congrats on the POTD! You deserved it.
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:51:00 PM
Thank you Taylor....hugs Tim
Date: 3/18/2015 5:26:00 PM
Very nice Tim...plain and realist...triggered many memories...Peter
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:50:00 PM
Thank you Peter
Date: 3/18/2015 4:45:00 PM
The beginnings of a love story...beautiful! Congrats on being TPOD! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:47:00 PM
Thank you Rhonda. It is a fabulous beginning...hugs Tim
Date: 3/18/2015 1:30:00 PM
A romantic masterpiece! Congratulations! An excellent P.O.D. to pick up everybody's day.
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:45:00 PM
Thank you my friend....hope things are getting better
Date: 3/18/2015 9:47:00 AM
Congrats.On. your well deserved poem of the day.Thankyou Tim,this is so beautifully spoiling the girl : ).Charma
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:43:00 PM
That name spoilt brat evokes fun and playfulness....thanks Charma.....hugs Tim
Date: 3/18/2015 9:29:00 AM
Those are the best kind of memories... of loved ones... Beautifully done...
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:41:00 PM
Thanks Carol....hugs Tim
Date: 3/18/2015 9:28:00 AM
So you're a hopeless romantic too! It's the only way to fly, Mr. Tim! Sure can relate to this one! I can certainly understand why it was chosen the POTD! Congrats!
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:39:00 PM
Yes I am hopeless...lol
Date: 3/18/2015 8:21:00 AM
A well deserved pick for a wonderful poet, Congratulations on Poem of the Day. 7
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thanks Eve...hugs Tim
Date: 3/18/2015 8:03:00 AM
You are the man! Nicely done my friend. Congrats once again!!
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:36:00 PM
Thanks David
Date: 3/18/2015 7:03:00 AM
Grats on poem of the day Tim :) hugsxxx
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:12:00 AM
Congrats, my dear. You deserve it. Hugs
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Date: 3/18/2015 4:37:00 AM
- Tim, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2015 3:57:00 AM
Excellent. Those are wonderful memories to recollect often. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:35:00 PM
Thanks Ravi
Date: 3/16/2015 11:37:00 PM
Sounds like my kinda girl, Tim. Spoilt Brat...how sweet!!! Sometimes a girl has to take the lead....beautiful
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:31:00 PM
As a man I don't mind...hugs Tim
Date: 3/16/2015 7:08:00 PM
This is a lovely memory you have shared with us Tim, in great detail. Gives one a sigh after a deep breath!
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Date: 3/18/2015 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Connie....hugs Tim
Date: 3/16/2015 4:42:00 PM
Fantastic and Very.very sweet poem. .II love the way she answers Spoilt Brat..It puts a smile on my face.Its lovely to swing on the swings till one touches the sky..So ffull imagery and beauty..It deserves a favourite..There it goes!!Charma
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Date: 3/16/2015 4:52:00 PM
Yes I loved that part too...a tease : ) ...thank you Charma...hugs Tim
Date: 3/16/2015 4:36:00 PM
simply delightful Tim! Hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/16/2015 4:44:00 PM
Thanks Jan...hugs Tim

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