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Split In Two

One island; one people, two nations Dominican Republic Haiti An island split in two by European colonialism, a most vile economic mechanism One part of the island was controlled by France The other part of the island was controlled by Spain The saddest part of this deal, is that those two separate people are the same Split in two by a nationalistic name Some be Haitians, some be Dominican Republicans One island; one people split in two Posterity's children will ask: which one are you?

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2017 1:50:00 AM

I feel a great deal of the reasons why Haiti suffers so much is the mountains that divides the two making the weather on the Dominion can side have a much better climate and easier to grow crops. It reminds me a bit of the U.S. and Mexico where I have visited. I have never been to Haiti/Dominican Republic except through documentaries, but I certainly have empathy for them after the tragic earthquake. Cindy.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2017 1:55:00 AM

My Kindle changes my words which is why it says Cindy...instead of Contd.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 1/19/2017 1:52:00 AM

Your poem reminded me of the pain they endure partly because of logistics. Hopefully one day that will change and the Spanish side will help out their French brothers. I enjoyed your poem Freddie. : ) 7

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/18/2017 10:30:00 PM

Yes, history is fascinating! Nationalism always seems to get in the way of peace! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/18/2017 7:28:00 PM

That is interesting; learned something new today! Thanks Freddie; this was a history lesson in a well written poem! P &L~Che

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2017 3:57:00 PM

So you are from there? I wish I knew more about that part of the world. I bet the history is so fascinating. I enjoyed this read.

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/18/2017 4:40:00 PM

Oops. No, I am not from either place. Love always.

Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 1/18/2017 4:39:00 PM

Ty, Andrea. Do I am not from either place, nor are any of my relatives to the best of my knowledge. I am simply a student of history ... anybody's history, doesn't matter ... any history interests me. Appreciate the kind comments. Love and peace to you.