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Splash Dance

Let's take a walk where raindrops dance beneath the feet, in rainbow hue Where mirrored worlds, and twin skies meet, in puddles forming in the street Our umbrellas opened wide, while other people, scurry by Forgetting in their rush of day, to see the world is scrubbing clean We'll stamp our feet to make a splash, while those around us make a dash With diamonds in the morning light, to quench a tongue in sheer delight Perhaps the gentle rain is kind enough to wash away a threadbare heart, a broken dream, from yesterday... enchanting me to believe within, to entertain my child again We'll listen to the whispered winds, the sweet refrain of falling rain, as if we were the child again. We'll be as one, with earth and sun, and know that rain can be a friend Let's hold up hands to catch the sky,...our inner child is waiting in the wings
________________________________________________ For Leonora's Contest: "Umbrellas"

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Date: 4/4/2014 6:08:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your nostalgic poem, Carrie! No surprise it's a 1st place winner! Congrats! Love, Kim
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Date: 4/3/2014 2:02:00 PM
Dear Carrie, We should all try to keep that child within us. Loved this delightful poem. Congratulations on your big win. Love, carolyn
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Date: 4/3/2014 4:51:00 AM
Hi Carrie, Congrats on your win. Loved the light hearted style you created in your inner child's enjoyment of living ' in the moment ' feeling of a rainy day Regards Theresa xx
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Date: 4/3/2014 1:53:00 AM
My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, carrie
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Date: 4/2/2014 3:56:00 PM
I had a lovely rain dance with you!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/2/2014 3:01:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Sara
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Date: 4/2/2014 11:40:00 AM
A lovely write. congrats. BG
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Date: 4/2/2014 11:20:00 AM
- Hey Carrie- Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/2/2014 11:12:00 AM
This is a wonderful write Carrie; back to childhood days! congrats on win. // paul
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Date: 4/2/2014 9:55:00 AM
My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend Carrie ! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Love lots always and biggest hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/30/2014 12:20:00 PM
A delightful read . Been digging in the garden all day , I ache all over and this lovely poem is the perfect remedy.
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Date: 3/28/2014 5:49:00 PM
Ahh!! Reads like winning material for Leonora's contest..I am glad that I chose this very expressive and poetic work to read today..Sara
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Date: 3/28/2014 9:41:00 AM
What a beauty..the child in me is splashing in puddles and singing in the rain : )..Going to my fav...Tnks for yr prayers..My father in law is still in hospital but tnks God..the heart surgery was a success.
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/28/2014 9:44:00 AM
I will pray for your father-in-law's speedy recovery, and so glad it was successful!! It may be a hard recovery, but I'm sure with a loving family, he will be in good hands! Thanks for letting me know! Hugs, Charmaine!

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